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UltimateSassMaster [2014-10-25 00:56:34 +0000 UTC]
I just now got around to reading this because I suck
But I'm loving the story so far! That little back and forth with the Meowth was probably my favorite part xD Idk why but I honestly like seeing your characters get pissed off at people hahahaha
//dashes on to read the rest
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XxBloodsbanexX [2014-10-16 04:17:26 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I've finally gotten around to reading this, and I'm so glad to be! I'd heard good things about your writing, I've been meaning to check out some of your work, but I finally found a bit of time to read this entry! I really admire your dialogue, I think that's what sticks out to me most so far - everyone speaks pretty naturally! I have a hard time with that myself, so good on you~ Your pacing is also very relaxing, never sticking to one moment for too long, but not so swiftly that it's easy to get lost and disoriented. Oh, and the characterization is great too! I'm a sucker for stuff like that - you do a wonderful job of conveying distinct personalities in such a brief amount if time. Lovely work~
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic [2014-10-15 22:59:40 +0000 UTC]
Wow, your writing style is brilliant! The way you write characters is really well done!
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic In reply to writercoda [2014-10-15 23:23:52 +0000 UTC]
Welcome! Heh, I wish my written entry was as good as this.
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MuriArts [2014-10-14 02:51:26 +0000 UTC]
I just love how you write the guild NPCs personalities.
And the story is turning out great!
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NimrodJaeger [2014-10-14 02:19:45 +0000 UTC]
"I'll just be a second," he called to Cinder, then turned back to the Fighting-type with a grin. "I'd like to test this thing out, if you don't mind."
"Huh, test?" the Riolu asked, dumping the water into the tank, "Um, it'll be another few minutes before my partners gets back with the apples, they're-"
Before he could finish his sentence, the Sandshrew plunged forward into the water, soaking his face and chest before bursting back up.
"Perfect!" he gasped, throwing his coat off, "There, it's ruined! Thanks very much, and I'm going to go change."
Oh, Adrian, you bloody genius, you
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Pentaguro [2014-10-13 22:52:04 +0000 UTC]
Your story here is progressing really well, wouldn't surprise me if you two would win the writing part of the contest!
Oh, and of course I can't wait to see Sepia's accompanying picture here, I'm sure it'll turn out awesome. As always xD
Oh oh, thank you for the cameo (Ferroseed...)! 8D
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Eggdis [2014-10-13 13:33:37 +0000 UTC]
brush past a tall xatu
now i can only imagine Azalia looking at them like ''excuse you where the fuck are your manners''
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writercoda In reply to Eggdis [2014-10-15 23:06:08 +0000 UTC]
don't think they had 'em to begin with XD
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Numbuh1234 [2014-10-13 05:58:51 +0000 UTC]
Great story, Coda. That three piece deserved no better fate.
Also, thanks for the cameo!
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GreaserTom [2014-10-13 05:19:34 +0000 UTC]
Ok so like I hear everyone praise you for your writing and like I never brought myself to read any of it, but now I read this and goddamn I understand why everyone praises you. Shit's fuckin' engaging man (or woman? I dont fucking know)
Or to make things simpler,
I didn't know you were so good, Now i know, holy shit.
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GreaserTom In reply to writercoda [2014-10-13 16:12:53 +0000 UTC]
(I guessed right holy fuk)
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hack-slash [2014-10-13 03:19:31 +0000 UTC]
Oh my this is fantastic also thank you very much for the cameo
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