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WindgeistArts [2013-02-19 09:16:09 +0000 UTC]
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First of all I have to say: When I saw the preview of this I thought this was a photo ^^
This pic is really interesting made, and it looks real e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Well I see that you put effort in it ^^ and I'm stunned: You finished this within two hours? That's awesome; other people would have needed much more to get ths far.
The fur details are great, but there could have been a little bit more in my opinion. But well, you also put alot of effort ito the eye, the shining looks totally real, and if you ask me, it's good that you also painted the face e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Wink/Razz"/>
Also I like how you made the whiskers, some of them could have been a little bit longer but that's up to you. The hais look like real hairs, I think it's really hard to achieve that e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
Also I like how you added the lights in the left, it makes the picture more intense, the BG doesn't look boring regarding the fact that it's black. The BG makes me look at the cat and the lights, and it seems that the cat is wodering what these lights are e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
This is an amazing picture, and you can be proud of it e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> I hope I wasn't harsh or something like that, I don'T do critiques that often e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/>
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Falifer In reply to WindgeistArts [2013-02-19 16:26:35 +0000 UTC]
I agree with this critique, mostly the whiskers! Both my my kitties' whiskers are much longer, unless they fell out or got cut somehow.
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Mikufresa In reply to WindgeistArts [2013-02-19 16:22:54 +0000 UTC]
The eye is the only thing I saw it as all right.
The anatomy is just copied from a photo so it's not so hard to make the lines and that kind of stuff.
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Wolfinee In reply to Mikufresa [2013-02-20 00:45:00 +0000 UTC]
What does that even mean, exactly?
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Mikufresa In reply to Wolfinee [2013-02-20 07:01:09 +0000 UTC]
That this seems to be copied.
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Wolfinee In reply to Mikufresa [2013-02-20 11:48:40 +0000 UTC]
You mean it looks like I was drawing from an image? I said that in the description... "wanted to practice doing eyes from a cat image I found on google". This image to be exact. Once I had the picture oriented in the position I liked best, I used the grid method to sketch it out and then I painted. So technically yes, it IS copied from a photo... If I were painting a photo realistic image of you, I'd also use a picture for reference.
"The anatomy is just copied from a photo so it's not so hard to make the lines and stuff" <-- Seriously, what does this even mean? Are you trying to imply that I have traced an image, or that you found this to be such a simple picture that anyone could do it? Can you paint like this? If you TRACED a picture (which I haven't), could you paint any better? If it's so easy, why don't you take a crack at it? ^_^
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Mikufresa In reply to Wolfinee [2013-02-21 10:37:28 +0000 UTC]
My drawing style is not realistic but if it was I won't trace, anyway, I just said that is easy to do this for anyone because is just copied from an image, so please don't try.
Also, if you were just practising, just don't submit this, if you did it by your self without any image reference it's ok, but looking at this I see that is not art is just a traced image.
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Wolfinee In reply to Mikufresa [2013-02-21 17:01:24 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm... alright. I guess I can just take this as a compliment. So good that you can't believe it's not traced, eh? Heh.
I worked pretty hard on this piece and I'm pleased with it. I posted it here for my friends to see, and to get some CONSTRUCTIVE feedback on my painting techniques... Not to be accused of tracing.
I understand you're only 13 so maybe you just haven't learned manners yet, but you should really work on that. I also hope that as you mature artistically, you'll learn how to use reference images to your advantage in developing your skills, rather than seeing it as cheating... because I'm pretty sure it would help you. Just ask an art teacher.
As for my picture? It's not something I'd sell to someone (if I ever wanted to sell ANY of my work... though I don't) since I used the entire composition of an existing photograph (NOT traced), but it was excellent practice -regardless of how 'easy' YOU see it to be- and I was impressed with myself enough to share it with others.
So anyway... be nice, have fun, and have a nice life, kid. Good luck with your own artistic adventures. *thumbs up*
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Mikufresa In reply to Wolfinee [2013-02-21 17:27:33 +0000 UTC]
Don't take it as a compliment, whenever you use a reference image just try to draw something different, not just the same exact picture.
I'm 13, but I'm pretty sure I have enough manners or whatever you say, you don't understand what I'm saying and that I'm smaller than you (not sure if I'm) doesn't give you the power for making compliments to yourself and making me feel like I have the worst art in here.
I've been in more than one art class, never liked them, I like to make my OWN work and not to trace or copy a picture from someone.
Hope you can understand, my English is still horrible.
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Wolfinee In reply to Wolfinee [2013-02-21 20:05:09 +0000 UTC]
What's selfish? Asking to be left alone because you keep saying I traced something I didn't? Lol. I didn't do anything to deserve the insults, so you're just mean. I do wish I could be 5yrs old though... I'd do anything to be a healthy little kid again instead of dealing with my illness as an adult. I had so much more energy back then... *sigh* I'm flattered that you find me so interesting that you can't seem to stay away... I knew you liked my art and wanted to be buddies!
But I'll make you a deal... I'll stop being a 5yr old kid, if you gtfo my page. How's that? I'll even say please, "Please Go Away." I mean.. I haven't said a word about YOUR art (just your manners) and I've allowed you to spam insults on MY page... but it's fine if you want to move this to one of YOUR deviations. What do you say? I have nothing better to do with the rest of the day now that I'm off (cause I'm lame like that...), so I might as well enjoy the company while I try my hand at being exceedingly annoying, right? We could be shit heads together!
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Mikufresa In reply to Wolfinee [2013-02-22 14:05:18 +0000 UTC]
If you don't answer to my comments I don't get to know this comments.
Anyway, it's okay, I won't comment any more, I just wanted to make you know that I don't like this art.
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Wolfinee In reply to Mikufresa [2013-02-22 16:10:41 +0000 UTC]
Cool story bro.
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Mikufresa In reply to Wolfinee [2013-02-21 18:42:44 +0000 UTC]
That's pretty selfish from you.
And that last comment makes me feel that you are just a five years old kid.
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Wolfinee In reply to Mikufresa [2013-02-21 20:07:15 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha. I don't even know how to reply to comments properly, look at that.
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Wolfinee In reply to Mikufresa [2013-02-21 20:19:50 +0000 UTC]
Totally. I left MYSELF the comment instead of you. Haha.
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Wolfinee In reply to WindgeistArts [2013-02-19 10:09:09 +0000 UTC]
Haha, awesome! I'm glad I was an inspiration for something, lol.
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HonestyAct [2013-03-10 20:43:39 +0000 UTC]
or eye, I should say.
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