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Umberoff — WRINGLOCKE: Chapter 11.1
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Published: 2014-11-09 05:51:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 4299; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 37
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OOPS SUDDEN AND AWKWARD CUT-OFF. this part was gonna have more, including the battle and all, but it ended up being SUPER LONG and also I think it had too much going on. so for clarity's sake I had it here, at the expense of having a weird cut. next page will probably be very soon to make up for it!lotsa ~vague league talk~ going on here! I wasn't sure whether I wanted to at first, but eh, I'm probably going to make a little extra page thing to explain some more about the league details in this universe. I've been trying to integrate various pieces of info elsewhere, but hopefully that'll make things a little more clear overall.
these are one of those series of pages where I feel super iffy about 'em, mostly because I ended up doing like a thousand dialogue rewrites, which I'm still not sure about, and it led to lots of speech bubble moving so there's some awkwardness... BUT I'm not doing myself any favors by griping about it, so I hope they're still sorta fine? whooooo
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i thought that the zubat and gastly were the same person for like, the entirety of before-this-chapter :,)
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SIEGFRIED. YA GOT YOURSELF SOME EXPLAINING TO DO IF YOU RETURN TO THE TEAM. Who is this old dude. I'm so curious... WHAT SHOULDN'T THE LEAGUE FIND??? [ ZOOMS IN REAL CLOSE ON SIEG ] .... Ya go secrets. I can keep'm. ALSO THAT ZUBAT DRAWN IS SO DANG CUTE.
Oooh love the sunssss....et? sunset I think ANYWAY I love the sun! And the petals blowing by! The forest on the horizon too <3 Very nicely done! Aaand Elle is NAWT happy with Sieg at ALL. dsfjksdafk omg his words I cannot. I cannot.
YES LEON. GET IN BETWEEN. SPEAK YOUR WORDS OF WISDOM AND-- Goshdangnabbit Sieg. Ya can't just act all casual like this. Oh boi. There comes Arian. With questions about Slowpoke Cave. OOF. I still love that chik...
SIEG AND ARIAN STARE DOWN. ARIAN LOSES. SIEG WIN-- oh m y G OD SIEGFIEND YOU CANT JUST SLAM SOMEONE TO THE GROUND WHEN THEY'RE WALKING OFF. I know he's an ass but r e a ll y .
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I can#'t dskjfkjdsafkjdsagOOOHHHH Another zubat! What a cool lookin dude! A great page so far! Can't wait to continue on!
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Ve been really impressed with your world building from the start.
Keep on 'participating' Seigfried!
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aw geez siegfried just gets more Mysterious and Brooding with each page and im so excited to learn more of his secrets!!
and ooooh really digging that zubat design! i love how distinct ken and siegfried look from each other while still both looking like zubats :>
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The Most Mysterious Boy™
but thank you!! making distinct designs for the same pokemon always gives me some trouble, so I'm glad to hear that they both manage to work :>
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I love that Zubat, uh, chin-mouth-mask-scarf thing! What a great idea for a gijinka design!
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Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! So good to see this page omg :3
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THAT GHASTLY THO (i mean i'm assuming he's a ghastly)
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