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smoothitastic [2014-01-12 02:22:11 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
The visualization of this scene is very well done, in that it keeps the same style of Gravity Falls and the attention to detail on how the story describes/implies the scenario the Pine twins are in.
The originality of the drawing is impressive to say the least. The gorge's layout and design, the clothing (Mabel's cute sweater to be exact), and I suppose the creatures that lurk in the background (though more on the how you still lay a reminder on the threatening presence).
Technique is just extraordinarily amazing. You manage to keep the simplicity that makes Gravity Falls have its unique cartoon style. The added fog/dust, shadowing, and foreboding presence of the lurking creatures gives the wanted atmosphere of panic, distress, sadness, and all negative emotions that can be arisen in a scene like this. Nearly everything is done flawlessly (that disney channel though).
It's quite incredible how you managed to leave such an impression on me with just a simple picture as this. I feel actual concern and compassion for them here even though it's not from a real episode and not even real danger. But you've put together such a brilliantly done piece with it's atmosphere, tone, color palette, style and e criteria, that just squeezes at the heart of the GF fans. From what I see, your work always has some sort of impact, whether funny or serious, it never disappoints.
There is a but though, and it's just very minor details that can be shaken off. The lines, done amazingly of course, is different from how the actually style is. There are certain places the lines actually change slightly in thickness, usually around curves that give it that certain "drawn" cartoon feel. Again, this is only a very slight difference, but a nice one in that it adds to originality. Another would be Mabel's bangs being on the wrong side, again this is only a slight flaw. But one I that catches my attention the most is Dipper's legs. Though there is fog/dust and rocks all around, the way his legs disappear behind the cloud is rather blunt. Given, in a thick enough cloud things can "disappear", but it generally the more an object protrudes from a cloud, the more it looks to fade into " disappearing". But this is just an observation.
All in all, it is an amazingly, lovely piece.
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TigerBlack62 In reply to smoothitastic [2014-01-12 23:51:18 +0000 UTC]
I think you just gave a critique in the wrong GF fanart.
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Krabyplankton [2016-09-24 01:44:44 +0000 UTC]
cute picture but bill is off model Β he never uses line of action he is always stiff and his pints are round other than that its great
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mudwingfantasy [2016-05-24 01:27:31 +0000 UTC]
look where bill's hand is
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UltZrbrcrx [2016-03-02 04:56:45 +0000 UTC]
Hey kids! Welcome to Disney Land!
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jewelajrocks In reply to UltZrbrcrx [2016-03-12 04:37:11 +0000 UTC]
Whoo hoo ππππ!!!!
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Prototype-LQ [2015-12-19 21:28:51 +0000 UTC]
Oh my...RUN!
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EchoAndTails [2015-10-25 05:26:18 +0000 UTC]
This....This needs to be like...a mini-episode or something....
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PencilWalker [2015-06-19 23:26:26 +0000 UTC]
What does Dipper and Mabel thinks of Alex Gravity Falls creator?
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Hailstorm3 [2015-04-05 02:25:57 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome!
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camicazi26 [2015-03-18 02:07:35 +0000 UTC]
This is the REAL founder of Gravity Falls...or should I say Creator?
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enjoydamoment [2015-03-17 19:43:05 +0000 UTC]
Be careful around that dude with the goatee, he's way more crafty then that triangle any day (And he's done more emotional damage).
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Emotional-Kale [2015-02-07 00:45:49 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS SUPER AWESOME. AND ACCURATE. AND FUNNY. NICE JOB KID!
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KindofanArtist [2015-01-10 00:55:22 +0000 UTC]
It's time for Mabel and Dipper to meet their maker ^-^
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Kigurou-Enkou [2014-12-16 07:56:28 +0000 UTC]
"What, didja think I was kiddin' when I said the universe was a hologram? Just ask this guy! Ahahahaha!"
"Hey, I hope you kids didn't actually believe McGucket was the author of the Journals! You should have seen the look on people's faces when they realized I tricked 'em!"
If this actually happened, it'd make no sense but it'd be so entertaining xD Also nice job getting the art style accurate!
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BipperPines11 [2014-11-18 23:59:54 +0000 UTC]
Alex Hirsch and billΒ
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Raven-Ravioli [2014-10-17 20:51:59 +0000 UTC]
If this was a real episode...
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MicroPumpkin [2014-09-21 19:38:42 +0000 UTC]
Needs to become an episode.
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Snowfall-Abby [2014-08-20 22:23:41 +0000 UTC]
LOL is awesome XD
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ValerieFaller [2014-06-15 18:53:02 +0000 UTC]
Heh, awesome!
It's so accurate!
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shade3734 [2014-05-23 00:48:35 +0000 UTC]
Bill: *cheerfully* You're Gonna Die!
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Spencer759 [2014-01-18 05:28:41 +0000 UTC]
wow so real !!
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Ethan2556 [2014-01-16 02:43:01 +0000 UTC]
Tigerblack, you are AWESOME!! You should consider contacting Disney to have the pics on Season 2.
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TigerBlack62 In reply to Ethan2556 [2014-01-16 04:30:17 +0000 UTC]
I'm probably in their black list by now.
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kevin43432 [2013-12-29 15:32:44 +0000 UTC]
nah it can't be real beside stan and stanley are fat they can't be thin
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shade3734 In reply to kevin43432 [2014-05-28 00:42:31 +0000 UTC]
thats because that is gravity falls creator. not stan or stanley
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kevin43432 In reply to shade3734 [2014-05-28 08:05:56 +0000 UTC]
ohhhh and that billsΒ
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GitcheeGooGirl [2013-12-28 19:24:30 +0000 UTC]
Alex is so cute
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Arden-Crystal [2013-12-10 16:54:14 +0000 UTC]
Are they tapdancing, or proclaiming that we're gonna die?
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Arden-Crystal In reply to TheLordOfDoomyDoom [2014-01-03 22:07:27 +0000 UTC]
I imagine that's what happened in the real show. dAmmit (get it? dA? deviantArt? dAmmit? Aw, whatever), the next season is actually supposed to show us Bill, more about the twins' past and parents and shit and other stuff and I NEED SEASON 2!
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TheLordOfDoomyDoom In reply to Arden-Crystal [2014-01-03 23:07:51 +0000 UTC]
Haha, no, I get it! Yeah, I'm pretty excited for season 2, I really dig that show. It's probably one of my favourites at the moment. It's very unique. I'd love to see more of Bill Cipher and I'd love to learn more about the Pines' family. I bet they're sort of an odd bunch. I had this silly idea once that the Pines' family was probably full of paranormal investigators and illuminatis and magicians and even scam artists like Grunkle Stan, all kinds of weird people involved in weird shit and have probably always been searching or protecting the books Grunkle Stan got. But then after time, they began to change and some of them didn't believe in the paranormal (including the twins' parents), and they shunned their weirder relatives a bit. I also thought maybe the Pines' family in the past have had a deal with Bill Cipher, since the little bugger seemed familar with Grunkle Stan, but a younger Stan must've broken the deal, being the law breaking scam artist he is, and now Cipher wants revenge. But those are just silly ideas. Sorry for the long comment, haha.
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