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AdorableDrawings [2020-04-14 21:36:00 +0000 UTC]

wonderful!

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JcArtSpace [2016-06-28 21:55:45 +0000 UTC]

Yo! I'm from ProjectComment . Noticed you could use some critiquing. First off, let's start off by stating this is a pretty good picture. Your character's anatomy is accurate to a semi-cartoonish character. I like the effort put into the surrounding library. I can tell you took your time and paid close attention to texture and details.

I've noticed that the other commenters pointed out some issues with the color. I'd like to add to that: The color is vibrant and eye-catching. I especially like how the yellow curtain frames the character and draws attention to her. However, although detailed, the coloring lacks depth in the form of shading and highlights. Everything seems to be completely mid-tone. 

I found a useful tutorial for shading. This works for pretty much any traditional media, and it's very detailed and there are mulitple parts to it :arven92.deviantart.com/art/Arv… Sorry I couldn't find anything shorter and basic. Most tutorials on devaintart are for digital paintings.

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Blue-F-Phoenix [2016-06-28 18:33:00 +0000 UTC]

Greetings from ProjectComment

This is a lovely piece. I like the concept and composition. I think what could improve is the colour. It's not bad in any way, but it feels raw and not united. The yellow and pink in the centre feel too strong. So that's something worth thinking about. You could maybe try just using cooler colours (like shade) for the book shelves and warmer, softer colours around the girl to indicate that the light falls on her? Just an idea. The weight of the line is equal everywhere. It would give more depth if you try using stronger/heavier lines for heavier surfaces and lighter lines for lighter surfaces. Right now the whole art feels flat and 2D. You can choose to make it flat on purpose, but right now it doesn't look intentional. But overall I think it's nice

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RE-vis-d [2016-06-28 18:26:20 +0000 UTC]

This is a pretty good piece! The layout is interesting and functions to create a unique image. This is most apparent in the choice to put the bookshelves around the character; they function like a border around her while also adding to the unique image of the piece. The colors are also vibrant and fluid. The contrast between warm and cool colors draws the eye across the image, and puts emphasis on specific things. However if I were to suggest one thing, I would recommend polishing the shading on the books in particular. Because they are not shaded with the same amount of detail as the character, they don't look "real" (meaning in the picture). But still, this is a good idea and I would love to see you improve in the future

-Ryene 

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JMFAnimations8 [2016-06-28 18:21:08 +0000 UTC]

Whew, so much detail. Look something in a princess story.

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HeardDdragon [2016-06-28 12:46:11 +0000 UTC]

Relly nice
i really like the color 
and all the deatails 
her perportons are a bit of in her arems
and the books are a bit overcrowded in some arias
Still well done 
also like her dress

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avicados [2016-01-09 18:28:29 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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