Comments: 15
AProudHomestuck [2020-01-01 08:34:40 +0000 UTC]
since there was a cover, i know that caleb hyles would be singing this.
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KH-Clark-Designs [2017-08-08 18:30:17 +0000 UTC]
OOh! I like genderbent Yellow Diamond a lot!
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RosyPriestess [2017-08-07 19:44:41 +0000 UTC]
Hai~ Here~!
To start off, I really enjoy how you designed Blue Diamond and Yellow Diamond. They look unique while still staying true to the original designs. It's always good to stay in touch with the original since It makes a redesign all the more special. However, I have noticed a few things I would like to point out. The anatomy seems a but stiff and their poses are unnatural feeling. I know they're space rocks but try making poses more fluid and natural. The hands need work, they look messy and a bit deformed. I always suggest using references until you can comfortably draw them. I also noticed the complete lack of shading. Even simple shading can improve a piece greatly, as it will stop them from looking so detached from the background. Remember, shading colors doesn't mean you just make it darker than the base layer. For instance, shade blue with purples and powdery blues. Play with the color wheel a bit. In the end the colors look much softer and more natural!As for these masculine forms, they still look quite feminine. As Blue Diamond and Yellow Diamond still have very pronounced hips and tighter waists. My only suggestion is to make them appear more squared. Since women are best drawn using curves and men with straighter lines, though this can vary at times. Try adding more wrinkles and feeling to the clothing. Blue Diamond's dress looks like just a bunch of shapes, allow cloth to flow naturally. Again, references can be a life saver. They are often what I tell other artists to use as well. All in All, it's nicely done. Remember practice is key
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SoldierMoonArt In reply to RosyPriestess [2017-08-11 08:08:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the constructive criticism!
I drew this on my phone and the background was
actually an after-thought! I will put your comment
towards my upcoming artworks!
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ABorealis [2017-08-01 20:25:53 +0000 UTC]
this is acutally pretty nice!
there are only a few probably problems i have.
1.it would look better if you shaded it more
i know that in SU theres almost no shading either,but thats because they also have animate alot.
the point is,if you shade almost nothing,you're just stuck with bland (almost) neon colors.
2.maybe its just me,but the charactes dont fit with the background
3.once again,maybe its just me,but yellow diamonds neck and head is placed...alittle weird
other than that,its pretty good!
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SoldierMoonArt In reply to ABorealis [2017-08-02 01:28:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! This was my first scene draw so like you said, there are
a LOT of flaws hehe! I really wanted to shade according to the room/bg,
but I really had no clue how! But thankyou for your honesty, your criticism
is very much appreciated and I will do what I can to improve!
Thanks for the lovely comment!
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Lazyxcat [2017-07-31 05:02:09 +0000 UTC]
i love it so much
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arthappyneko [2017-07-31 01:17:04 +0000 UTC]
Cool designs! I loved this scene.
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