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Metalman999 [2017-09-01 05:30:24 +0000 UTC]

I will buy number 3 if she is still available.

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EduartBoudewijn [2017-08-25 14:53:10 +0000 UTC]

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First off, I'm not very familiar with SU; so I'll mostly be critiquing these from an outsider's perspective. Making variations based on a popular show is often an interesting way to experiment and try new things, while still having a base to fall back upon. Be sure to use this as a learning experience and use the lessons learned from these in your future works. 

The first thing that really stands out to me is the amount of lean in your images. This is very common with artists, but once you know about it you can pay attention to it and mostly adjust it. All of your characters seem to lean slightly towards the right end of the page. Flipping your drawing while sketching can make this very apparent (usually when viewing an image normally you won't notice the lean, since you're used to it, but flipping it will make it stand out like a sore thumb). My advice would be to try and be mindful of this during your sketch and flip the page often. 

I feel like you're struggling a bit with hands as well; the hands you've drawn here look pretty unnatural, almost like their bones are broken. Try to use references when drawing hands and perhaps even just take some time to study hands specifically. I know hands are tough, every artist struggles with them, which is a good reason why you should spend even more time on them. I'm also not quite sure why Grey Pearl's back is bending that way. I'm guessing you're trying to have her slouch a bit, but the way it looks at the moment it just seems like her spine is snapped in half. 

I hope this critique doesn't come off as too negative; if you have any further questions by all means reply to this comment and I'll gladly elaborate further. I do quite like the colors you picked for these characters and I think you went into an interesting direction with their designs. I hope you'll continue practicing and improving!

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TsunLion [2017-08-05 00:35:42 +0000 UTC]

i wish i had points 

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GoreyBloodyTeethArts [2017-08-05 00:14:08 +0000 UTC]

I want #1 but I don't have 300

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