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Published: 2015-05-22 12:41:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 512; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 5
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Spock remembers Jim when he was young.

When I close my eyes,

My mind wanders to the past.

A time where things seemed so much simpler.

Your innocence and youth visits me.

Always in my dreams.

I wish to stay there, be one again with you.

But, I am still needed here.

When I have completed what I have sought out to do.

I shall join you, beloved.

When I close my eyes,

I think of you.

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Comments: 10

marybaker1959 [2017-02-06 13:48:38 +0000 UTC]

So Beautiful, I could feel his pain and desire to reunite with Jim but knew his work was not yet done. I understand that pain all to well, I lost the one presin I loved more then anything last year. We never got together for reasons that I understood very well. John and I staid friends for 41 years, I loved him all those years and Β always will. I miss him so very much, so when I look at this picture I can understandhow he feels because love never dies especially when you love someone like Spock loves Jim.

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slashygirl In reply to marybaker1959 [2017-02-07 21:04:51 +0000 UTC]

So sorry for your loss. Yes, love goes beyond the grave. Β Love eternal.Β 

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Moonlight-Phoenix [2015-05-30 20:30:36 +0000 UTC]

Nearly made me cry!!!! But so beautiful!

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slashygirl In reply to Moonlight-Phoenix [2015-05-31 10:42:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I appreciate it.

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AloiInTheSky [2015-05-22 20:54:16 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful. Poignant an beautiful. Going on living, alone, must be so painful at times for Spock Prime...
And I love that screenshot you chose here. He's so beautiful~

OMG I've not dared to re-watch the reboot movies since Leonard's passing, but I do believe I'll burst into tears when I'll see Spock Prime :'-(

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slashygirl In reply to AloiInTheSky [2015-05-22 21:50:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for the kind words. It certainly must be painful for Spock who sees this other Jim and not the Jim he remembers.

I know it's difficult, just seeing him again, brings back the loss of Mr. Nimoy.Β 

Like I mentioned before, I don't know how to add another pic on deviant art. So, if you wish to see the second one with Jim here it is: Β www.ksarchive.com/viewstory.ph…

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AloiInTheSky In reply to slashygirl [2015-05-23 22:26:46 +0000 UTC]

It must feel certainly quite strange and alien to Prime Spock...

Yes, so difficult. He's so much our beloved old Leonard here :'-(

Jim's embrace was so fierce in that scene... He held so tightly Spock's arms....

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taranteljazz [2015-05-22 20:07:49 +0000 UTC]

There, now you broke my heart.

No, seriously, it's a beautiful inner monologue, simple and touching, and a spotlight on Spock's character (and emotional ) development.

Thanks for sharing!

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slashygirl In reply to taranteljazz [2015-05-22 21:52:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for reading and commenting. I didn't mean to break your heart. I saw this screencap and just had to use it for my poem.Β 

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taranteljazz In reply to slashygirl [2015-05-22 22:35:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh, come, you know I didn't really mean it!

I just loved the poem, it's beautiful, and it made me sad, but in a good way, and it's perfect for the screencap!

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