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slashygirl — I Love You

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Published: 2015-05-17 05:39:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1123; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 16
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Description Art by: Tarenteljazz

His breathing is rhythmic and his pulse is the same beneath my fingertips.

Exhaustion has depleted his reserves of energy and he lies here motionless. 

My eyes fall upon him, his eyes closed, dreaming of pleasant things.

He stirs unexpectedly, his hands moving slowly, as they caress my own.

One eye, then two open lazily as it tries to focus on the individual before him.

A slight smile appears, and then a bright grin spreads wide as it sees its occupant.

A tired voice speaks in the late hours of the night...

"I love you."
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Comments: 14

marybaker1959 [2017-02-06 14:01:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh this is such a very beautiful. The picture by itself tells you the whole story when you look at it and then you write these words to describe what is happening and my heart just melts. Bravo to you both for this wonderful beautiful work of art.

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slashygirl In reply to marybaker1959 [2017-02-07 21:03:10 +0000 UTC]

Again, many thanks for your kind words. I find inspiration from the images I find. 

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taranteljazz [2015-05-17 21:26:10 +0000 UTC]

You did it again - I prefer the poem to the pic!

And I followed your link below,  great idea to chose that screenshot as a 'finishing touch' and put the emphasis on Jim, who has the last word...

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slashygirl In reply to taranteljazz [2015-05-17 22:10:59 +0000 UTC]

You are so kind. You made my day. It's nice to hear what you think, but you have to remember you made it possible with you art. Love you dear.  

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taranteljazz In reply to slashygirl [2015-05-18 02:17:38 +0000 UTC]

And it's you who made me into a devoted K/S shipper!

Love you too.

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AloiInTheSky [2015-05-17 20:56:39 +0000 UTC]

This is so sweet~ I love your words so much <3 <3 Such care and love <3 <3

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slashygirl In reply to AloiInTheSky [2015-05-17 22:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I wrote it late into the night.  Tarentel did an amazing job. It wasn't easy to place Spock in that position.  Kudos goes to her as well. Thanks again. 

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AloiInTheSky In reply to slashygirl [2015-05-18 08:13:52 +0000 UTC]

<3 <3 <3
Yes, her photomanip is very beautiful and sweet. And probably highly difficult to obtain, as you put it ^^
So nice to see both of you working together to end up with such nice pieces~

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Moonlight-Phoenix [2015-05-17 20:13:37 +0000 UTC]

Amazing is the only word that formed in my mind when I saw this.  <3

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slashygirl In reply to Moonlight-Phoenix [2015-05-17 20:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much. I don't know how to add more than one image on deviant art, but I did add a screencap of Jim. The pics of Jim in bed and him in the second pic come from the episode Balance of Terror. 

You can view it here:  www.ksarchive.com/viewstory.ph…

Again, thank you for reading and commenting.

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Moonlight-Phoenix In reply to slashygirl [2015-05-18 05:17:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god, heart melted. I always love reading your works! I cant wait for the next one! <3

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SentinelSpockNimoy [2015-05-17 11:56:56 +0000 UTC]

SAY IT BACK, SPOCK, SAY IT BACK AND KISS HIM!!!!!

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slashygirl In reply to SentinelSpockNimoy [2015-05-17 12:26:18 +0000 UTC]

He will... Thanks for commenting.

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SentinelSpockNimoy In reply to slashygirl [2015-05-17 12:37:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh, good, because that is too sweet for him not to.

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