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Published: 2012-05-26 13:59:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 739; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 12
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A One Piece OC of me.Ji Su bekam ihr erstes Kopfgeld mit 17 Jahren. Ihr Vater, ein Marineoffizier, bekam davon leider mit. Daraufhin plante er, sie zu besiegen sobald sie volljährig geworden ist. Ji Su's Mutter stand jedoch auf ihrer Seite. Auch Ji Su bekam davon mit und sie lief von zu Hause weg. Aber sie hinterließ einen Abschiedsbrief an ihre Mutter hinterlassen. Als ihr Vater bemerkte, dass sie weggelaufen war, erhöhte er ihr Kopfgeld. Ihre Mutter war verzweifelt und traurig. Sie wusste nicht was sie tun sollte, bis sie schließlich ihren Mann angegriffen hat. Leider war er ihr ziemlich überlegen. Aufgrund dessen starb die Mutter von Ji Su. Ein Jahr ist vergangen und Ji Su kehrte in ihr Heimatdorf zurück und besuchte ihren verstorbenen Bruder auf dem Friedhof. Sie plante danach ihre Mutter zu besuchen, aber dazu kam es nie. Sie trauerte um ihren Bruder als sie plötzlich neben seinem Grab das Grab ihrer Mutter entdeckte. Sie weinte und war schrecklich entsetzt.
Not enough time to translate it in english, I'll do this later. And there are also coming more details to her story.
Can you give me feedback, please? This is my first drawing I upload her.
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here it is partly translate to English
Ji Su had her first bounty with 17 years. Her father, a naval officer, got it with unfortunately. Then he planned to defeat them once it has come of age. Ji Su's mother stood however on their side. Ji Su also got with them and they ran away from home. But she left a suicide note left at her mother. When her father noticed that she had run away, he increased her bounty. Her mother was desperate and sad. She did not know what to do until they finally attacked her husband. Unfortunately, he was quite superior to her. Because of this, the mother of Ji Su died. A year has passed and Ji Su returned to her home village and visited her late brother at the cemetery. She planned later to visit her mother, but it never came. She mourned for her brother when she next to his grave suddenly discovered her mother's grave. She cried and was terribly shocked.
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Oh, how nice of you, this is great. Thank you!
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No problem
I like your background story for charters look forward to see more
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Thank you very much! 
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I will only be able to give my opinion on the design since I'm not German
I think the height and eye style are very nice and I like her attitude. The vest and boots are quite fitting for one Peice too, nice job! Maybe for anatomy, the space between her legs is a little too wide but all the rest in nice ^_^
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Wow, thank you! = D This is a really nice compliment, because I never uploaded anything of my drawings on the internet = D
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You're welcome, I'm glad you enjoy drawing OCs too
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