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Shereja — Submission
Published: 2005-05-21 00:31:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 6461; Favourites: 109; Downloads: 39
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SubmissionI kneel at your feet, eyes down, waiting.. Very gently, you touch me under my chin. I look up at your face, the love I see in your eyes set my head spinning with possibility. You pull me up to you, and hold me so closely I can feel your heart beat. I open my mouth and try to relay to you the admiration and adoration I feel, but I cannot find words that are strong enough to express the depth of my emotion. So, I simply hold you closer, and try to breathe you in. I want to inhale you, carry you inside me, feel you, taste you, experience you. Why do you shape my world, why are you in my dreams, why do I feel strange when I talk to you, as if I were naked, and you could see into the depths of my shaded soul? Tell me, what do you see? Here is what I have wanted to give to you for a long time. In this collection of words, I live, with each line, I breathe. My heart no longer dwells in this body of mine, I am giving it to you. Now begins the courtship of a lifetime, you move so swiftly and gracefully, I hope I can keep up.
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My prurient, dominant fascination with your words knows no bounds.
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This encapsulates exactly how I feel when I am with my dominant. Well done.
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Thank you. I am glad you liked it.
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A very well put poem. I can definently see that point of view with how that was written. My sub strongly agrees with the views expressed in this poem.
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A lovely interpretation of that viewpoint. I have written, elsewhere and somewhat extensively, poems about BDSM also---quite different in style and view, admittedly. Hence, I find this poem quite fascinating.
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