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Well, this is my first editorial spread, so...practice is evidentially needed.
The text was really impromptu without any editing--although the actual editorial wasn't a part of the assignment. This was all about design. I had about a day to get this started and finished, since my homework was piling up pretty bad and this was at the top of the stack. I'm not totally happy with the anatomy of it, but for the time I threw it together, I feel pretty good.
Very Giger inspired. The idea was to take something a little like Giger and combine it with hints of "The Rape of Europa..." but I don't want to go too deep into what I was "trying to" say, I'd much rather hear what you all take from it in terms of thoughts and impressions.

As for the typography--suggestions?

Description
Well, this is my first editorial spread, so...practice is evidentially needed.
The text was really impromptu without any editing--although the actual editorial wasn't a part of the assignment. This was all about design. I had about a day to get this started and finished, since my homework was piling up pretty bad and this was at the top of the stack. I'm not totally happy with the anatomy of it, but for the time I threw it together, I feel pretty good.
Very Giger inspired. The idea was to take something a little like Giger and combine it with hints of "The Rape of Europa..." but I don't want to go too deep into what I was "trying to" say, I'd much rather hear what you all take from it in terms of thoughts and impressions.

As for the typography--suggestions?