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  I: Insecta

  I snap: a sling-shot
  of sinew, tendons whipped
  to joints that buckle in lines as cleanly creased
  as an origami crane. Poised on a tripod of paper tips,
  I anticipate the wind but there is only steel
  shearing bone and then it all unfolds
  with a scritch-scratch and tickle
  of segmented limbs sprouting,
  barbed as berry-canes.

  II: Hymenoptera

  My skin
  once fed on your skin;
  sipped at honeyed pores
  with a thousand tiny, hollow tongues

  III: Apocrita

  and those words you said, the ones that closed
  like fists to cinch me mute but for this
  thin-bodied whine: please
  don't ever speak
  them again.

  IV: Formicidae

  They're predicting swarms
  this summer: better batten down the hatches,
  plug all holes; those little bodies can creep in
  through the smallest cracks. In the event
  of a breach, do not keep low and roll.
  Reach  for the vinegar: it will stop
  the fire from spreading.

  V: Myrmicinae

  I understand instinct,
  automaton motions dictated
  by chromosomes and pheromones,
  dances stepped to the chemical outlines of feet,
  the endless, mindless back-and-forth; but
  what I don't understand is how any of it
  came to be choreographed
  in the first place.

  VI: Solenopsis

  When this has been pegged out,
  bound wrist and ankle, and I have watched
  its skin shrink and all the meat from it stripped,
  I will gather up the knuckle and toe bones, cast them
  on the sand and study patterns
  in the way they lie.

  VII: Invicta

  My words, rival
  colony to your words: black flood
  and fire-storm in a single, tangled mass
  that consumes and consumes, until there is nothing.



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Comments: 9

Adeimantus [2007-11-23 14:19:07 +0000 UTC]

Hooray for bastards and the art they inspire!

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livingcomforteagle [2007-03-10 21:27:58 +0000 UTC]

Insecta is a little harsh on the eyes for reading - it's hard to picture things like "to joints that buckle in lines as cleanly creased
as an origami crane. Poised on a tripod of paper-tips," - however, the rest of this is beautiful.

very nicely executed, very beautiful language.

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salshep In reply to livingcomforteagle [2007-03-12 13:49:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks much for commenting, and I really am glad you liked this, it's my favourite poem of mine. Insecta is a bit difficult, but I wanted it to be more evocative of feeling the sight, just to start with. I hope it does that, it's a pretty unusual thing for me to want to do in a poem. I appreciate the fave!

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livingcomforteagle In reply to salshep [2007-03-12 18:08:47 +0000 UTC]

it is very awesome! I hope you do more like it

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myloveliestsequence [2007-02-05 22:14:14 +0000 UTC]

this washed me away, and still does. i can't think of anything useful or even slightly helpful to say but this: fucken hell. really. big hit.

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salshep In reply to myloveliestsequence [2007-02-05 22:20:30 +0000 UTC]

Aww thankyou so much for saying so! And for the fave, I really appreciate it!

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SRSmith [2006-09-13 02:49:11 +0000 UTC]

Not only did I find this fascinating, but it spawned a companion Wikipedia study of each of the terms that was equally fascinating. I'm not sure what it says about my wiring that I enjoyed this so much, but I certainly did.

Unusual to be sure, and I can't fathom what could have inspired its writing, but it's brilliantly executed.

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BrassyLion [2006-08-27 15:50:26 +0000 UTC]

this is great
i have know i dead what the subtitle names mean
but the stanzas are amazingly descriptive
i especially enjoy the Apocrita stanza
very short but still very effective

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salshep In reply to BrassyLion [2006-08-27 22:21:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, BrassyLion.

The subtitles a list of biological classifications . It starts with Insecta: insects, then Hymenoptera: membrane-winged insects, then Apocrita: the narrow-waisted, Formicidea: those who produce acid, Myrmicinae: those who swarm (literally, unquestioning followers), and the last two are specific to Solenopsis Invicta, the fire ant.

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