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Published: 2015-07-29 17:23:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 914; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 9
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Description more details..,more work....
final result...

hope you like it!
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Comments: 21

TearsofTurquoise [2016-05-23 21:20:42 +0000 UTC]

Nice piece Good job on the facial proportions, those can be hard for many artists to get, especially at this angle! Since the face appears to have been the intended focal point due to the light being centered on it, I think adding some more detail, like pores and more little strokes to give a more realistic effect would help you I think adding some more flecks of colour or small accents to the eyes would also help to bring more life into the piece. I would also recommend adding some more detail to the hood of her sweatshirt because it seems a bit rough compared to the rest of the piece. Those are all the suggestions I have for you, overall this is quite a good piece, just could use some more detail throughout to really make an impact

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Rosuke97 In reply to TearsofTurquoise [2016-05-24 07:20:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, well honestly I agreed what you're saying, adding some more detail will give more life to this piece, I was totally missed the hood detail after I uploaded it, I'm gonna consider your suggestions and make an improvement, someday i'll go back to this piece and make it look more realistic. Thanks for your criticism, really helped me a lot.

here's the recent art that I uploaded after taking criticism and suggestion from my experience: fav.me/da1z3d9

again thank you, TearsofTurquoise .

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TearsofTurquoise In reply to Rosuke97 [2016-05-24 11:30:47 +0000 UTC]

Wow, the difference is quite drastic with the added detail Awesome!

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Rosuke97 In reply to TearsofTurquoise [2016-05-24 14:08:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, i'm really appreciate your suggestion and criticism, really help me to improve more and more. ^-^

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Matty-Chan1 [2015-10-28 12:43:41 +0000 UTC]

Wow; this piece of art is incredible. You've done amazingly well, especially with the proportions; very realistic.
The only thing I'd say is don't be afraid to be bold with your shading and add some dark shadows to really exaggerate the contours of the face to make it look more 3-Dimensional, especially around the cheekbones and the eye sockets. It might be an idea if you don't do this to try working from a photographic reference. You don't have to copy the actual image itself, but it would give you more of an idea of where to place the highlights and shadows. If you don't like this idea then try to think of a direction that the light is coming from, whether it's shining directly onto the face or at an angle so one side of the face is darker.
Other than that, it's faultless. I can't get over the lips - you've even made them look glossy. Really well done; keep at it.   

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Rosuke97 In reply to Matty-Chan1 [2015-11-03 06:39:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Matty-Chan1 really appreciate your comment! I'll consider about your idea and make an improvement.
There's a lot of things need to learn so thank you for your criticism, really helpful. 

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Matty-Chan1 In reply to Rosuke97 [2015-11-03 18:08:38 +0000 UTC]

Glad it helped I'm looking forward to seeing your next piece of art

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EZENT [2015-10-19 05:55:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is amazing work. I aspire to one day be able to create art like this... how long did this Take you??? There is not much to critique, everything is perfect. Her hair is perfect. I like the highlights on them. The lighting and shading is spot on and it really adds to its realism.  That's is the best thing about this piece. My eyes are drawn to her eyes and I can stare at them for hours... awesome job on this... instant classic and favorite in my opinion. A standing ovation........    

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Rosuke97 In reply to EZENT [2015-10-19 10:40:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks really appreciate your comment. Really helped me a lot.
Well, it takes me like 2 to 3 hours to finished it. I used Paint tool SAI as it easier to used.
The whole process i used a brush, for an example i used a small size brush with some transparent on the hair with difference colour.
Here's some tips, take some reference like a picture and draw it make it look same, as you will improve yourself as time goes on.
It may hard at first but eventually you'll find yourself a better way to draw.(it's was hard for me too ^-^)

So, I hope you can achieved your goal and do the best!

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EZENT In reply to Rosuke97 [2015-11-18 04:39:18 +0000 UTC]

i have a question....is this smudge art or a true digital painting?

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Rosuke97 In reply to EZENT [2015-11-18 11:27:34 +0000 UTC]

It's completely digital art, as I said I used Paint Tool SAI software to make this. Made it from scratch with a brush.

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alexandersinnelius [2015-09-01 14:55:53 +0000 UTC]

Not sure if i love Yui or just girls in hoodie...
But well done,  i love the hair work and near precise facial feature..

Need some realism by toning down the sharp edges but this is stylised well.

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Rosuke97 In reply to alexandersinnelius [2015-09-06 14:28:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks..i'll improve more.

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alexandersinnelius In reply to Rosuke97 [2015-09-06 14:36:49 +0000 UTC]

nah, she looks hot

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Kochichan [2015-07-31 22:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Yui! She looks beautiful.

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Rosuke97 In reply to Kochichan [2015-08-01 02:03:10 +0000 UTC]

she is.Thanks

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Xorsama [2015-07-30 07:34:53 +0000 UTC]

the hairrr <3

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Rosuke97 In reply to Xorsama [2015-07-30 10:56:11 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^-^

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Xorsama In reply to Rosuke97 [2015-07-30 14:21:14 +0000 UTC]

^^ yup 

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DonyaMagdy99 [2015-07-29 21:34:55 +0000 UTC]

puree  

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Rosuke97 In reply to DonyaMagdy99 [2015-07-30 02:56:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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