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This pose was a hard one to portray. First off you must think of the line of action, that is how the body parts draw the eye around your pose. I drew the lines of action in blue, so you can see what I am talking about. In your pose the lines are very sharp, when I adjusted the pose you can see that the lines are more round and lead into each other. I think the biggest issue was how you drew the angle of her spine. By making the front of her body more round it leads the eye better. Also, her feet were on different planes and it made her look a bit awkward. I did make sure to fix her jawline and sketch in her far hand where I thought it should go.

Description
A correction for of their piece: [link] for

This pose was a hard one to portray. First off you must think of the line of action, that is how the body parts draw the eye around your pose. I drew the lines of action in blue, so you can see what I am talking about. In your pose the lines are very sharp, when I adjusted the pose you can see that the lines are more round and lead into each other. I think the biggest issue was how you drew the angle of her spine. By making the front of her body more round it leads the eye better. Also, her feet were on different planes and it made her look a bit awkward. I did make sure to fix her jawline and sketch in her far hand where I thought it should go.