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Published: 2018-02-18 17:24:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1084; Favourites: 87; Downloads: 6
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Description I was feeling a bit lazy so I went for a fairly simple and to-the-point portrait of an old D&D character ^^ I figured I should try for more realistic facial features than usual to see how it goes lol.

Haji is a calm and charismatic Aasimar man, second son of a very powerful elitist family from a tyrannical kingdom. So he's also a narcissistic, promiscuous guy.

Comments and critiques are welcome <3
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Comments: 26

Whisper292 [2018-04-15 21:32:16 +0000 UTC]

He's gorgeous. I love the look on his face. Makes me wonder what he's thinking.

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RasheruSuzie In reply to Whisper292 [2018-04-15 21:36:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! x3

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Scharle [2018-02-21 20:42:27 +0000 UTC]

Hi, 
I'm from   

Have no words to describe how cool and realistic this character looks. I don't know how you are doing it but the face expressions are so well done in all of your drawings. He has a bit of a mischievous but also misterious look. Something is going on in his mind and it is nothing 'good' . Drawing skin and faces seems to be your strengths. The face and skin looks so realistic and spot on lighting (three point lighting?)!. If your goal is it, to make the character look more realistic I would maybe work on the hair and fur a bit more. But I guess you just decided to leave parts less detailed than others. They are some things that I just notice that I will point out but I guess I can't help you directly how to fix it but I guess at this level you will know yourself how. First The ear(s) appear a bit flat like paper (perhaps to little graduation in colour). Then the neck appears a bit to wide to me. I know he is quite muscular, but for my taste the neck is to strong to be considered nice looking. Then the gold part of the necklace (if it's gold?) could be made more shiny or if it's a dim gold then it could be made more realistic by adding more undertones. Lastly I like the background colour, it matches the other colours of skin and the golden accessories. But somehow a smooth background is a bit too boring for this guy. I would draw a background that accentuates his character. Maybe you could use the same colour but make the background stony somehow. I don't know xD ...

Hope I could help you

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RasheruSuzie In reply to Scharle [2018-02-28 03:16:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much for the nice comment! x3

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Scharle In reply to RasheruSuzie [2018-02-28 20:17:09 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Imdraproc [2018-02-21 20:09:12 +0000 UTC]

Hi there, I'm from ProjectComment

There is a certainy little funny coincidence here: as late as yesterday, I was actually designing a pair of Aasimar characters (a renegade prince and princess) who come from some theocratic state ruled by a holy tyrant demigod who surrounds himself with noble houses consisting of his debauched descendants. 

The name is... interesting, since in Arabic, a Hajji is someone who has done the pilgrimage (Hajj) to Mecca; I suppose that based on the character's name and some design details, that the character is meant to come from a Middle-Eastern-style culture? 

I like how well you gave the character that air of calm smugness and relaxed confidence. the gold necklace and exposed pectorals make look like a person who likes flaunting his looks and status, especially combined with the aforementioned facial expression. I think the facial proportions are good. 
The colours are fit in well - not too little, not too much. The way that the light comes in from one angle while being heavily shaded on the other side gives the impression of him being a rather two-faced fellow; one who presents a pleasant face to the outside world but on the inside is gleefully planning of how to best destroy anyone who has ever slighted him. 

The bronze/gilded shoulderpads are a bit peculiar when combined with the open vest, but gives a bit of a ' light-footed fighter'-feel. Does he enjoy duelling, simply likes the look of pads combined with light clothing, or is it that he is so confident in his own skill and athleticism that he doesn't mind fighting with a bare torso? 

It is an atmospheric piece that I feel gives such a solid impression for what kind of person this character is, and the light/dark-effect is part of what makes it so effective. In most other artwork, I would have thought that the contrast between the lighter parts and the shaded one swould have been a tad stark, but it works well here. 
Gold eyes work nicely for Aasimars and Tieflings alike. 

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RasheruSuzie In reply to Imdraproc [2018-02-28 03:16:15 +0000 UTC]

Haha, sounds like some interesting characters : D I do like Aasimars and tieflings. As for the name, it's unrelated to that meaning but yes he's supposed to be a blend of Egyptian and Moroccan. If I recall, I just looked up a bunch of names from various countries and thought it sounded cool lol. Gave it no deeper thought xD

Thanks for the comment! ^^

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ladymarcail [2018-02-20 07:10:56 +0000 UTC]

He doesn't strike me as a bad person but that could be just me ;w;

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RasheruSuzie In reply to ladymarcail [2018-02-20 11:53:44 +0000 UTC]

Yes, he could afford to look more.. arrogant or something :3

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ladymarcail In reply to RasheruSuzie [2018-02-20 22:10:45 +0000 UTC]

Wooohahaha!!!     

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Ink-Mug [2018-02-19 23:18:07 +0000 UTC]

First of all, this is an AMAZING piece! The colors are outstanding and harmonious and they give a lot of atmosphere to the character!! His features are incredibly well done and detailed and his eyes have so much personality it's astonishing!!
The only thing though is that i think the skin is a little too smooth. I don't know what program you use but there are some brushes in photoshop (if you use it) that could give more texture to his skin.
The shadows on his chest are a little too dark and you could've softed a little more. Some cast shadow from the necklace would be good too.

But, regardless of my critiques, i really like this!! Like, REALLY like this!!! It's an amazing character full of personality and story and you can tell that only by looking at his eyes, which is amazing!!
Outstanding job! Keep it up!!

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RasheruSuzie In reply to Ink-Mug [2018-02-20 03:20:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch! I appreciate the kind words! ^^
I do use Photoshop, I added some dotty texture to hopefully emulate pores and beauty spots but it's true that the skin feels generally too smooth o: Do you have any examples of the kind of texture that would make it more realistic?
Thanks for the helpful suggestions :3

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Ink-Mug In reply to RasheruSuzie [2018-02-20 22:33:51 +0000 UTC]

There are many brushes out there that help, i, for example, use some rocky brushes to make the skin look less smooth (even though painting skin is a fairly new thing to me XD) but there are also some textures you can apply after the piece is done. You apply a layer, with the texture, above the final piece and set the layer mode to 'overlay' or any other mode you want. Here's an example of texture you can use for free, though you might have to put the credit in the description www.freepik.com/free-photo/yel… texture&page=1&position=1
Change the size and stuff to fit the character and you can also set the opacity to low, like 20 or 30. It's just a minor detail either way, so there's no need to go overboard

Another thing you could do is to not blend so much. i myself am guilty of overblending so i understand it. Let the strokes be visible and the extra smoothness will go away ^v^ From a close perspective, the strokes will look weird but, from afar, they will give the skin more life and give an painterly look to the piece! But it's just a preference and an idea, do what you think it's best while painting!!

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RasheruSuzie In reply to Ink-Mug [2018-02-21 03:38:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the info! I actually tend to blend much less usually but thought more realism might need more blending O: I guess I'll need to experiment to find the right balance ^^ Thx again ^^

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CrazykillerStudios [2018-02-19 22:55:55 +0000 UTC]

Extremly well done picture 
The Shading and lightning is perfect 
the colours are outstandning 
I love his look on his face with that smile <3 love it 

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RasheruSuzie In reply to CrazykillerStudios [2018-02-20 03:18:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! : D

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MayStardust [2018-02-19 17:33:50 +0000 UTC]

For a simple portrait, it's a very beautiful one. Very realistic, especially the eyes :00

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RasheruSuzie In reply to MayStardust [2018-02-19 17:37:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! : D

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Lazyxcat [2018-02-19 11:23:27 +0000 UTC]

    

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theJfluffy [2018-02-19 07:32:34 +0000 UTC]

VERY REALISTIC! Fantastic Work!

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RasheruSuzie In reply to theJfluffy [2018-02-19 13:50:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! x3

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Peace-In-Violence [2018-02-19 06:16:47 +0000 UTC]

very nice

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RasheruSuzie In reply to Peace-In-Violence [2018-02-19 13:50:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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AmirShinobi [2018-02-19 02:41:35 +0000 UTC]

Nice!!

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RasheruSuzie In reply to AmirShinobi [2018-02-19 13:50:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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AmirShinobi In reply to RasheruSuzie [2018-02-19 14:23:10 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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