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Sitta-europea [2017-02-18 15:49:24 +0000 UTC]
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At first, composition - this pretty parrot is definitely looking at something, but here is too little space in front of her head - she is closed in this composition like bird in cage e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> If she will be painted near the right edge of paper, and a little bit lower, the painting would look better, even if you will cut her tail then.
Secondly, there is something wrong with her beak. I like the shadows on her head, the black background is also very nice (interesting facture with the blue and green points), but the contrast between this green grass (?) and dark background is too hard, seems like you can't decide what kind of background give here. These blue flowers are also unnecassarily distracting - maybe if they will be paler it will be better?
But generally this painting is nice, I like it e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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Paintwick In reply to schizocatgirl264 [2017-03-01 17:29:34 +0000 UTC]
First of all, I'm really sorry to reply only now to your critique :C I did read it but I didn't find the time to thank you before! Thank you SO MUCH for all these compliments, I don't know how to thank you haha! I'm so glad you like the painting so much, awww! Thank you for being that kind and supportive!
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Paintwick In reply to starlintheprophet [2017-03-01 17:31:37 +0000 UTC]
Aww thank you for the critique, I'm reaally glad that you like the painting!
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mockingbirdontree [2017-02-13 17:29:42 +0000 UTC]
Such wonderful painting! Looks very beautiful!
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Paintwick In reply to mockingbirdontree [2017-02-18 11:18:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much!!
and thank you soo much for the donation as well, it's so kind ♥♥
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Rotanloukku [2017-02-13 12:51:41 +0000 UTC]
omg what a cutie!! <333
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The-Wandering-Bird [2017-02-13 06:26:05 +0000 UTC]
He's so beautiful! I love the matching flowers, and how well the bird and flowers "pop" in front of the dark background. There are so many layers of cool blues, greens, and grays. It's a very calming picture.
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Kammyl0l [2017-02-13 05:00:28 +0000 UTC]
So cute
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Sound-of-Heaven [2017-02-12 23:38:30 +0000 UTC]
How pretty! I love those bright blues! This is actually my favorite color of parakeet. Funny thing is, my mom and dad both had parakeets this color as kids, long before they ever met each other. I believe my mom's was named Pretty Boy and my dad's was named Butchie, and Butchie used to be able to say his own name.
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