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Published: 2011-12-27 09:36:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 859; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 20
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Traditional collage transfered to ps and collaged once more
I like the colours, the face and dress, but something's not right, i think...still, i have no idea what's wrong...any suggestions?
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"I'm here on behalf of because your piece was in the group's critique requested folder."
I absolutely adore your color-choice! The colors work really well together and give an overall mysterious feel.
I also like her facial expression and the harsh contrast between her white skin and the dark hair and eyes.
Her left side feels a bit odd, as the breast is not as defined as the other one and it looks like she hast two collarbones on this side, one painted with a black line (which looks right to me) and one painted a little lower with some darker shadow above.
The textures in the painting are great, but is it intentional that they get less on the bottom? Maybe it would look a bit more unified if you textred the bottom some more. But I really am not sure about that, you could try it if you want ; )
All in all I like it very much and I'm going to fave it as soon as I add the comment ; )
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thank u sooo much, i will try to do as you wrote and maybe i would be more pleased wth this piece
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you're very welcome
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I like all the different patterns and textures.
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