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Cloudy-Quill [2017-07-08 23:16:27 +0000 UTC]
I think that this is a fantastic piece! You obviously have a good understanding of anatomy and lighting, and the placement of the objects around the figure give the impression that she is floating in some strange world. The colours are very calm and pleasing to look at, and the overall drawing is gives off a unique sense of mystery and wonder.
One thing that I've noticed among your drawings, however, is that they do look a little rough and unfinished. In some of your deviations (including your drawing of Luminatia), it adds to the ethereal tone of the characters. However, I feel like that this painting in particular could use a bit more refinement, especially on the hair and the masks she is holding... I'm not entirely sure why I think this, but I believe that having the contrast between slightly blurrier background and body against a more detailed face could really help increase this piece's mystic feeling.
Oh, and I just found this funny (it may be a simple mistake you looked over), but the right foot appears to be inverted...
Hope this helped, and have a good day!Β Β
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kirilatiki In reply to Cloudy-Quill [2017-07-09 19:03:50 +0000 UTC]
btw, thnks for the care to check the one I did before, I found this very kind ofyou
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kirilatiki In reply to Cloudy-Quill [2017-07-09 16:20:09 +0000 UTC]
OMG i SWAPPED THE FEET, Indeed I could have used more refinement, I had problemns on Sai and ended up not finishing it, I will work over it and update as soon as I can
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Creamyque [2017-07-08 00:32:07 +0000 UTC]
shouldn't this have a mature content filter? isn't she naked?
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kirilatiki In reply to Creamyque [2017-07-08 01:05:21 +0000 UTC]
from the rules, my dear:Β Mature Content TypesDeviantART provides optional flags that can be applied to mature content deviations to give the viewer a better idea of what the work contains.
- Nudity: If your work contains nudity, revealing the genitalia of a model or character or revealing a full female breast including nipples, you should assign this tag
I would like to point out that she has no nipples and no genitalia for she is not even a human but a creature with no means of reproduction, soooo technicaly, no need to filter.
~I even think it's more artistic in a way, and I love the humanoid form, it's elegant but I'm not too fond to the genitals
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Creamyque In reply to kirilatiki [2017-07-08 01:11:01 +0000 UTC]
oh ok. thanks for explaining.Β
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Anna821 [2017-07-08 00:31:47 +0000 UTC]
Heh, cool.
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