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Lula-Bell-X In reply to KeeleZeible [2009-02-08 15:43:32 +0000 UTC]
oky doky will do il leave a comment on the picture 2moz when ive come up with something! XD
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Lula-Bell-X In reply to KeeleZeible [2009-02-08 16:50:47 +0000 UTC]
hehe it's okay! it totally deserved it! I've got the main plot line of the story now, so you want to hear it... i'll tell you anyway lol. okay.
The princess is unhappy being stuck inside the walls of the castle, so she goes to the King (her father) and asks him for permission to leave. He is worried about her, so he makes her go to the sorceress and get a potion that will make sure she will not get unhappy again. The sorceress gives her a potion, so that if she gets unhappy, her father and the people of the kingdom will always know and be able to send help, but she doesn't say how they will know.
She is happy for a while, and plans to get married. The day before the wedding, her husband dies, and so she dyes her wedding dress black, and starts to go back to the castle.
When she gets there she finds the sorceress sitting on a ruined wall that was once the castle. When the sorceress tells her that her unhappiness has caused the people and the kingdom to fall, the princess is so distraught, she kills herself, and is forced to haunt the ruined halls of the castle every night, searching for some proof that her family might still be alive.
heh heh so there, uh... i know it's kinda depressing, which is weird, coz i barely ever think up sad stories... but thats how i kinda imagined her to be...its bad i know but...
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Lula-Bell-X In reply to KeeleZeible [2009-02-08 20:54:25 +0000 UTC]
lol um...tankys? yours was so much better
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akela9 [2009-01-19 18:03:27 +0000 UTC]
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I'll be honest, hon... I don't understand the piece. I'm not sure what it means. But I like the dark, moody feel of it, and think it's composed well. I especially think you did a nice job with the lighting where the little red (Motes? Faeries?) are around the girls dress.
Keep up the good work!
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KeeleZeible In reply to Raishuu [2009-01-18 10:55:30 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the comment and effort, thanks alot really.
i had always hated the way i leave alot of space in my works, it is irritating.
yeah, same, never really liked that chandelier being up there, but i cant just pull off the scene that i wanted without it, i tried to do a version without the chandelier, and i think it looked better than this one but i didnt bother submitting it, coz sure it did looked good but the message i was trying to say was partly lost. so i just bear with it XD
Im also irritated by the fact that the chair was made out of plastic XD i just cant do anything about it, it is part of the orignal stock XDI hope i can just erase it XD i so hate it, but to have a broken chair in the scene was on the plan XD
thanks really for sharing your thoughts and time and effort and everything you dont know how much these words meant for me. Trully appreciated it
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KeeleZeible In reply to Raishuu [2009-01-18 11:44:02 +0000 UTC]
ahahaha sorry for that, many say that i suck when it comes to giving names and titles XD
It was actually a scene on a story i had in my head, the story goes like this; go to (A) if you dont like reading much or if you dont like your time being wasted and (B) if XD
(A) A princess once lived in a castle, she left it, but after some time decided to come back, to her surprise it was no longer a castle but a disaster. Yeah~ Welcome back indeed.
(B) Once there was this princess who wore a white dress that glitters, every stitch, every thread, and all of its ornaments. It was almost blinding.
She lived on a castle whose every wall is adorned by works of art of any kind, paintings, sculptures, you name it. Some say the walls of this castle number by the thousands, even by millions, some even exaggerates it to the infinite, ever increasing.
One day the princess left the castle for an unknown reason, whether coerced or by choice, we do not know, but indeed she left it. As time passes her feeling of longing for home intesnifies, day by day, nostalgia builds up. Along with this was her white dress that once almost blinding, turned pitch black.
She tried and wished to come back but sadly she's too far out already and no longer know the way back, until one day, hope shines that led her back to the castle.
So there she was, at the castle of many walls' great hall. To her surprise and disappointment the same hall that witnessed all the celebration and happiness on that castle is the same hall that welcomed her, nothing but ruins. And so the hope that shined so bright started to ebb away like a rose that wilts, bit by bit. Her castle a ruins, her throne broken and the people is absence. Nothing was left, except for a dim chandelier and its countless walls.
Yeah, Welcome back princess.
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Raishuu In reply to KeeleZeible [2009-01-18 12:08:53 +0000 UTC]
That's a nice story for the picture and very fitting. I would have liked some broken sculptures or ragged paintings on the walls maybe. But why did you add those red lights?
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KeeleZeible In reply to Raishuu [2009-01-18 13:09:37 +0000 UTC]
ehehe ^__^
thanks for being interested
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KeeleZeible In reply to ilovestrawberries [2009-01-17 03:51:55 +0000 UTC]
hah sige ty ty ng marami hehehehehe xnxahn mo na ako mdyo err sulky ako ngaun ehehehe
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lamagwa [2009-01-11 06:05:35 +0000 UTC]
teehee, you're back as well as your deviation's alive again!
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KeeleZeible In reply to lamagwa [2009-01-11 08:53:11 +0000 UTC]
naa! you don't
..i do
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KeeleZeible In reply to lamagwa [2009-01-11 12:20:21 +0000 UTC]
no you don't
i do
eheheh ^__^ kulit, namiss ko to
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lamagwa In reply to KeeleZeible [2009-01-19 12:42:06 +0000 UTC]
you sure are stubborn -_-
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lamagwa In reply to PJ731 [2009-01-19 12:41:15 +0000 UTC]
o.0 sa inyo!
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