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Published: 2017-03-29 17:20:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 422; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 7
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First off can someone please tell me if they can see what's off about this one? Cause I freakin can't...I wanted to turn back to traditional art again, I felt like it. Decided to try properly using pencils to draw something. Not the best, but for a first try I'm pretty satisfied. Drew a xeno cause they're the easiest for me to draw
This is like the worst description I've written...
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First, sorry that it took me so long to comment on your drawing.
One reason it that's I just can't find out what's wrong here. I mean, anatomy is really OK (from what little I know of xenos), and well, you're so used to draw them that you capture them really well. [OK for his too thin right leg, but it goes sketchy in that part]
Perhaps it's the technique per se you're ill-at-ease with? But from what I see, the shading is good, no problem here.
Perhaps you would like something with more neat contour, somethink less sketchy? You might want to use a harder pencil, and use the less hard ones (2B and more) only for the darkest areas?
Grrr I've the feeling I'm of no help here O_o
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No worries, it's fine
Honestly, yes, I do prefer the more cartoony look than this one. But I felt like trying it out. I never actually thaught of it; I was using 4B and 2B for the whole thing. Next time I'll try it this way
Thank you so much for the advice
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Oh yes, 2B and 4B certainly explain much ^^ You should use 3H for the initial sketch and then use 2B for shadowing. And 4B if you want for darkests parts ^^
You're welcome
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I looks pretty great!^^
I like the way you made the background
But I think the left leg (from our perspective) is a bit thin
unless it's supposed to be like that
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Thanks!
Yeah, both legs came out thinner than intended. On the sketch they were good, but I kinda fucked up the shading and the smoke effect... yeaaah... aside from that, can you see anything else that is off? The xeno looks weird to me and I can't seem to find the mistake
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Well the top half looks completely fine to me
But I think it's the lower half that is a bit off
I think the abdomen part is a bit thin tooΒ
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Aw hell... you're right, thanks. Should've watched out for that. Ya got no idea how oftem it happens to me, but I usually notice it when I'm still sketching. This time I obviously failed to do so. Thanks again, now I'll be able to sleep tonight
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Great that I could help^^
It still looks really goodΒ Β
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