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gvcci-hvcci [2013-07-05 21:25:31 +0000 UTC]
I love this so much.
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LastCreater [2012-12-01 15:17:23 +0000 UTC]
Perfect words
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Marwoucha [2012-11-03 21:21:47 +0000 UTC]
cooooooooooooooool
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9thShadeOfBlue [2011-12-30 14:27:12 +0000 UTC]
That's almost as profoundddddd as the mooonnnn on a starlessss nightttttt... *wears black converses*
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WMPBLV [2011-11-10 17:05:05 +0000 UTC]
Haii =3
Hum...I'm going to create an account on youtube about what I think about the world and stuff and I really think that this poem is funny and cool so I wanted to read this on my video to put on youtube, but first I need to ask you if I can because you made it so...can I?
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Indisputably In reply to WMPBLV [2011-12-01 23:18:19 +0000 UTC]
My goodness, I wrote this so long ago, and yet it is still the thing that ends up getting the most faves, ahaha oh well.
Sorry about not getting back to you, I really don't use this sight all that seriously anymore so I don't check in all that often. If you are willing to credit where you found it (my page) then I really don't see the problem with you doing that. Thank you for appreciating my silly little high school joke poem, and good luck with your youtube account.
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georgshadow [2010-03-08 15:59:30 +0000 UTC]
This makes my soul feel like black darkness.
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luvemoguyz [2010-01-14 22:23:42 +0000 UTC]
thats how i feel all the time haha
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CrystallizedAngels [2009-09-28 02:09:47 +0000 UTC]
I love it
i feel like this when my size 7 pants wont fit on my size 9 ass
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avatargirl93 [2008-11-03 02:51:52 +0000 UTC]
wow....that's so...deep O.O one of the few rhyming poems that i luff <3
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Indisputably In reply to avatargirl93 [2008-11-04 01:24:56 +0000 UTC]
I was going for the whole "Making a statement" approach. I'm satisfied with the reaction you have presented me with. ha
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MagicalFingers [2008-06-09 14:36:24 +0000 UTC]
Dude, this describes my life so much.
I'm just lost in this void of forever blackness. Tis like I'm falling into a neverending abyss of my aching heart and soul with the cucumbers and magical milk jugs.
Tis sad, my dear one...
Tis sad...
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Indisputably In reply to MagicalFingers [2008-06-10 02:31:33 +0000 UTC]
You see, I don't touch people's emotions, I deliver a swift beat down on their souls. Pretty effective when it comes to being a writer, or whatever I have the ability to call myself.
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Indisputably In reply to rvxen [2007-11-11 22:43:07 +0000 UTC]
that was the point man. That was the point.
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Shady-Business [2007-09-23 04:08:08 +0000 UTC]
I like it but i think i've seen better........like my own. You might want to consider a more vague approach to the point of the poem. Like what i did with mine. Take a roundabout way to get to the end.
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happy-bee [2007-09-03 19:09:51 +0000 UTC]
cool, i'l watch ya
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happy-bee [2007-09-03 16:17:15 +0000 UTC]
awesome! love it
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Indisputably In reply to happy-bee [2007-09-03 18:34:03 +0000 UTC]
It is only an early work so get ready for more...
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