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Indisputably — Emo
Published: 2007-09-03 01:44:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 2577; Favourites: 72; Downloads: 8
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Description The Darkness becomes me,
As I fall into pain.
My life is nothing but pain.
Outside is gay,
So in the dark I will play…
Forever Alone…
I’m an individual because I dress like my friends,
And I will decide when my life ends…

A swirling torrent of hurt and despair,
As I run bloody fingers through my own hair.
Unhappy and withered, for here I will sit.

All just because
My girl-pants don’t fit.
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Comments: 23

gvcci-hvcci [2013-07-05 21:25:31 +0000 UTC]

I love this so much.

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LastCreater [2012-12-01 15:17:23 +0000 UTC]

Perfect words

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Marwoucha [2012-11-03 21:21:47 +0000 UTC]

cooooooooooooooool

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GeesPumpkinPie [2012-04-03 14:04:06 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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9thShadeOfBlue [2011-12-30 14:27:12 +0000 UTC]

That's almost as profoundddddd as the mooonnnn on a starlessss nightttttt... *wears black converses*

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WMPBLV [2011-11-10 17:05:05 +0000 UTC]

Haii =3
Hum...I'm going to create an account on youtube about what I think about the world and stuff and I really think that this poem is funny and cool so I wanted to read this on my video to put on youtube, but first I need to ask you if I can because you made it so...can I?

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Indisputably In reply to WMPBLV [2011-12-01 23:18:19 +0000 UTC]

My goodness, I wrote this so long ago, and yet it is still the thing that ends up getting the most faves, ahaha oh well.

Sorry about not getting back to you, I really don't use this sight all that seriously anymore so I don't check in all that often. If you are willing to credit where you found it (my page) then I really don't see the problem with you doing that. Thank you for appreciating my silly little high school joke poem, and good luck with your youtube account.

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georgshadow [2010-03-08 15:59:30 +0000 UTC]

This makes my soul feel like black darkness.

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luvemoguyz [2010-01-14 22:23:42 +0000 UTC]

thats how i feel all the time haha

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CrystallizedAngels [2009-09-28 02:09:47 +0000 UTC]

I love it

i feel like this when my size 7 pants wont fit on my size 9 ass

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avatargirl93 [2008-11-03 02:51:52 +0000 UTC]

wow....that's so...deep O.O one of the few rhyming poems that i luff <3

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Indisputably In reply to avatargirl93 [2008-11-04 01:24:56 +0000 UTC]

I was going for the whole "Making a statement" approach. I'm satisfied with the reaction you have presented me with. ha

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MagicalFingers [2008-06-09 14:36:24 +0000 UTC]

Dude, this describes my life so much.
I'm just lost in this void of forever blackness. Tis like I'm falling into a neverending abyss of my aching heart and soul with the cucumbers and magical milk jugs.
Tis sad, my dear one...
Tis sad...

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Indisputably In reply to MagicalFingers [2008-06-10 02:31:33 +0000 UTC]

You see, I don't touch people's emotions, I deliver a swift beat down on their souls. Pretty effective when it comes to being a writer, or whatever I have the ability to call myself.

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rvxen [2007-11-09 22:38:00 +0000 UTC]

sometimes i feel like my soul of black ink mixes with others, but mine is much more darker than anyone else's it is forever void of love. no one understands fully, but i think you get close. close like my cure albums and razor blades.

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Indisputably In reply to rvxen [2007-11-11 22:43:07 +0000 UTC]

that was the point man. That was the point.

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rvxen In reply to Indisputably [2007-11-12 05:09:15 +0000 UTC]

[link] we share kindered spirits...

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Shady-Business [2007-09-23 04:08:08 +0000 UTC]

I like it but i think i've seen better........like my own. You might want to consider a more vague approach to the point of the poem. Like what i did with mine. Take a roundabout way to get to the end.

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happy-bee [2007-09-03 19:09:51 +0000 UTC]

cool, i'l watch ya

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Indisputably In reply to happy-bee [2007-09-03 23:25:18 +0000 UTC]

mmmkay...

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happy-bee [2007-09-03 16:17:15 +0000 UTC]

awesome! love it

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Indisputably In reply to happy-bee [2007-09-03 18:34:03 +0000 UTC]

It is only an early work so get ready for more...

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not-allowed In reply to Indisputably [2007-10-14 20:51:47 +0000 UTC]

you gay emo.

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