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HarlynStein — Jeff The Killer: My Version

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Published: 2015-08-17 05:04:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 2834; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 7
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Description Alright let me explain this before you guys start getting all confused:

This is a redesign I did of him, I got tired of the old design cause a few reasons:

One, he original design didn't really scare me much
Two: I thought a nice change would be nice
And three: THE FUCKING FANGIRLS. Why I point this out? Because they use that fucking design and make him look "Cute" or "SEXY OMFG HE'S SO HOT" and it's getting on my nerves

Now some little facts about this Jeff here:
He has piebald (which he hates), if you don't know what that is here are some examples ----> en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Piebaldi…
He is 26 years old
He had gotten bullied because of his 'weird skin' earning the names, cow, shit stains and walking spots
He is musically talented but hides it from other pastas
due to him catching on fire, he has bald spots on his head and hair no longer grows on his body except his head
Wear a sleeveless jacket that originally belonged to his brother Louis AKA Liu for short
Jeff is Portuguese and white (Portuguese is from his father's side)

Now his backstory is a tiny itty bit different, I'm just going to sum it up as short as possible:

    Jeffery Bosgues (Last name means Woods in Portuguese) has moved into a new neighborhood, his parents were auguring a lot and actually plan to divorce but he didn't seem to care. He was born with piebald, due to this, he was bullied quite a lot in school, which was one of the main reasons why they moved. His brother, Louis was his kind older brother who kept getting suspended for fighting to protect Jeff. As they moved in, Jeff stayed inside for most of the summer while he watched his brother play with the neighbor's kids. When he decided to come out, Liu introduced him to his new friends, Randy, Keith and Troy, they picked on him because of his skin, calling him shit stain and skinny cow. Liu was vey oblivious to this and assumed they were simple playful jokes. Jeff became insecure about himself and came to cut himself, starting to develop a disorder called Trichotillomania (www.anxietycoach.com/trichotil… ). The bullying has gotten worse while his parents arguments worsened along with it. 
Jeff had no one to turn to, he had no friends and the only person he could talk to was his brother, who seemed to be out more instead of hanging with him. One day, as Jeff was walking to his car to go to school (he's 17 in this story and has his own car.) Randy, Keith and Troy ambushed him, taunting him and threatening him to give the car keys up. Jeff refused and remember combat his father trained him because he was in the army. He fought back but something in him rushed with pleasure as he watched them suffer with every punch he threw. He didn't stop till Troy hit him in the back of his head; Keith and Troy dragged Randy away before anything else happened. Jeff, who realized what he done, quickly hopped in his car and drove off to school. He had gotten home and saw policemen in his house, while his family stared at him with disbelief the policemen forcefully handcuffed him, telling Jeff he was under arrest for assaulting Randy and his gang. The police drove off and Jeff and stayed in jail for a few days till he was bailed out by his parents.
Jeff later was pulled out of school and put into home school due to the bullying being just as bad there. During one of his teachings, he took a break and walked outside for a breather, only to run into Randy's crew. They immediately began to argue and Jeff fought each one with hesitation when given the chance. Randy held a knife and stabbed Jeff's leg, giving him an advantages and kicking him to the ground. Jeff carefully pulled out the knife and stabbed Randy in the chest, pushing him to the ground and began to stomp on his chest, killing him. He let out a small chuckle as the Randy's blood covered his whole shoe. Troy fled in fear while Keith fought Jeff. Both stumbled into Jeff's dad's garage with Jeff having the advantage until Keith yanked him down. He poured gasoline all over him, that was next the the car. Keith lit the match throwing on Jeff; he limped his way out and quickly shut the door before Jeff escaped. Screams and little laughters were heard.
Jeff was sent to the hospital and was amputated to save his live, the doctors came back and told the parents that he does not look the same due to his severe burns. As they unwrapped his face, his family gasped as they were a little frightened. Jeff wanted to see his new identity and was given a mirror, he had bald spots on his head, his piebald seemed to have spread more and now reached his face, a huge burn wound was on the back of the left side of his had and a scar on the right thigh. His parents told him they tried their best but Jeff only smiled twitching a bit saying. "I'm so beautiful!!! Why would I change this!?!" The doctors examined the boy's mentality and discovered that during the fight and burn, he developed schizophrenia. They gave him medication and sent him home as soon as he checked out ok.
During the same night, his mother heard whimpers and cries, she walked out and checked the bathroom seeing Jeff staring into the mirror. She turned him around seeing her own son mutilating his face with their father's combat knife. He asked her "Do I look beautiful." Receiving a frightful nod from her mother and told Jeff that she was going to get his father. She quickly ran into her room and woke her husband up, telling him everything she saw, and how he needs help. Jeff walked in to his mother calling him a freak, growing furious. He slit her mother's throat and stabbed his father's forehead wit his own weapon. He walked into Louis's room and took his sleeveless jacket before climbing on top of him, covering his mouth and stabbing his neck saying: Vá domir (Go to sleep in Portuguese). Jeff grabbed the gasoline and burned the house to ashes.
Reports have been made that an unknown killer has been burning down homes of families, leaving the bodies inside, this all started with the Bosgues family house burned down and Jeffery's body was never found.

(This is MY design of Jeff, you may not steal him in any way)

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Comments: 56

HarlynStein In reply to ??? [2016-03-29 01:40:45 +0000 UTC]

Really?? I'm glad you like my style of him!!!!

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12318freak97 In reply to HarlynStein [2016-03-29 18:54:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. And combining your style with a hint of mine Jeff would look more badass than ever.

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HarlynStein In reply to 12318freak97 [2016-03-30 00:24:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah that would be fucking cool! (Your art style is so damn amazing!!!)

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12318freak97 In reply to HarlynStein [2016-03-30 02:23:29 +0000 UTC]

Really? Why thank you.

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HarlynStein In reply to 12318freak97 [2016-03-30 02:26:42 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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12318freak97 In reply to HarlynStein [2016-04-22 01:02:35 +0000 UTC]

And I've done it. Sorry it took so long. Well here it is.
12318freak97.deviantart.com/ar…
Hope you like it.😋😜😉

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HarlynStein In reply to 12318freak97 [2016-04-22 02:54:04 +0000 UTC]

OMG It looks fucking amazing!!!!

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12318freak97 In reply to HarlynStein [2016-04-22 15:50:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks. I had a lot of fun doing it. and I just wanna say i'm sorry for not making exactly like yours I just got really lazy and made it look really different from your version. I'm so deeply sorry.

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HarlynStein In reply to 12318freak97 [2016-04-23 01:07:31 +0000 UTC]

No no no! NO need to apologize it still looks amazing either way!!!

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12318freak97 In reply to HarlynStein [2016-04-23 11:05:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm glad you like it.😊

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HarlynStein In reply to 12318freak97 [2016-04-23 14:44:38 +0000 UTC]

It's really good!!!!

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12318freak97 In reply to HarlynStein [2016-04-23 17:20:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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supernerdy1231 [2015-11-21 02:40:28 +0000 UTC]

That new Jeff you looks so much better and cooler. And the funny fact is that my last is Woods too.

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HarlynStein In reply to supernerdy1231 [2015-11-21 02:56:46 +0000 UTC]

yooooo dats coolio and thank you!!! 

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supernerdy1231 In reply to HarlynStein [2015-12-23 22:11:08 +0000 UTC]

Ur very welcome dude X3

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Raven0724 [2015-10-02 18:17:33 +0000 UTC]

Love it! ^.^

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HarlynStein In reply to Raven0724 [2015-10-02 20:24:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!!!

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Raven0724 In reply to HarlynStein [2015-10-02 22:03:19 +0000 UTC]

No problem! ^.^

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nekopear1 [2015-08-18 18:15:01 +0000 UTC]

OMGF YEAAAAAAAS FFFFFFFFFFFFFFF THANK NOW I AM JUST FREAKING OUT BRO!!!

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nekopear1 In reply to nekopear1 [2015-08-18 18:22:52 +0000 UTC]

No thank you for your art

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HarlynStein In reply to nekopear1 [2015-08-18 18:16:30 +0000 UTC]

THANKS A LOT BRO!!!!!!!!!!      

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MasterofMacabre [2015-08-17 17:15:31 +0000 UTC]

This... This is so fucking amazing...

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HarlynStein In reply to MasterofMacabre [2015-08-17 17:24:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!!! I got tired of how he looked before cause it didn't scare me much so I redrew him and tweaked the story a bit

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BlackMambaZANE [2015-08-17 09:51:01 +0000 UTC]

Ooooo nice

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HarlynStein In reply to BlackMambaZANE [2015-08-17 15:07:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!

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BlackMambaZANE In reply to HarlynStein [2015-08-17 15:08:30 +0000 UTC]

Np

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WigglesPaws [2015-08-17 05:22:05 +0000 UTC]

That, my friend, is awesome

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HarlynStein In reply to WigglesPaws [2015-08-17 05:24:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!   

I got a bit tired of his old look so I redid him and the story, they story seemed a bit off for me and then I rewrote it a bit to sound a little more believeable

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AthenatheWitch [2015-08-17 05:19:14 +0000 UTC]

omfg this is amazing*clapping quickly*thank you so much for this amazing piece!! <3

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HarlynStein In reply to AthenatheWitch [2015-08-17 05:21:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you thank you!!! I thought a little change to our popular killer would be nice!!! I kinda redid the his story as well X3

So many fangirls will attack me omg XD

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AthenatheWitch In reply to HarlynStein [2015-08-17 05:26:35 +0000 UTC]

yeah I read. :3 it's actually really nice and interesting. :3





*whisper*I'm that one fangirl who isn't gonna attack you XD about it XD I really love the redesign so much, I think I'll actually try to draw his badass self even though I'm shit at drawing guys XD

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HarlynStein In reply to AthenatheWitch [2015-08-17 05:31:20 +0000 UTC]

Yeeeeeee!!!!! *squishes mah own cheeks* tank ya miss!!!!   



*whispers back* Oh thank god!!! And its ok I suck at drawing girls XD

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AthenatheWitch In reply to HarlynStein [2015-08-17 05:33:30 +0000 UTC]

yasssss XD




*whisper*I love this version of Jeff so much XD like...I mean because of the fangirls, I actually ended up shipping him with himself and am trying to get followers of the 'best' crackship ever XD
it's pretty much just Jeff the Killer x Jeff-Kun(the version that's pretty much what super mega creepy rabid fangirls see XD)

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HarlynStein In reply to AthenatheWitch [2015-08-17 05:37:19 +0000 UTC]

*dances like an idiot* XD



*whispers* Thank you very much!!! Tbh I would ship that crack ship and a ship I made with him and an OC of mine but not changing the whole personality. Thats one of the things I do not like, when you change a persona's character when they are meant to be that way for a reason. God how Jeff looks like now to fangirls is just.... *sighs* It's crazy what some think nowadays 0-0

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AthenatheWitch In reply to HarlynStein [2015-08-17 05:47:54 +0000 UTC]

yay XD*dances like an idiot with you*





*whisper*yay for crack shippies..the funny thing is that it's pretty much original x fangirled. So he isn't really changed at all from either perspective(I guess if that makes sense? XD)

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HarlynStein In reply to AthenatheWitch [2015-08-17 05:50:51 +0000 UTC]

*does some weird boogie dance*



Ah, I see what you mean *nods* I'll ship dem all da way!!!!!!!!! XD

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AthenatheWitch In reply to HarlynStein [2015-08-17 05:58:21 +0000 UTC]

omg dammit I can't copy XD


heh yesss...Jeff-KunxJeff the Killer

wanna see a couple pictures of them? XD it actually makes the cutest ship ever if you play your cards right XD

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HarlynStein In reply to AthenatheWitch [2015-08-17 06:02:19 +0000 UTC]

I'm soooooooo coooooollllllll (not XD)


Yesh, I would luv to se dem togetha!!!

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AthenatheWitch In reply to HarlynStein [2015-08-17 06:04:22 +0000 UTC]

lol wow XD


and hehehehe :  athenathewitch.deviantart.com/…
blaye-hatsuki11.deviantart.com…
They'e both my version and someone else's version of it XD It's so amazing though lol

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HarlynStein In reply to AthenatheWitch [2015-08-17 06:14:18 +0000 UTC]

teehee XD


Yaaaaaaasssssssss they so fabulous!!!! *snaps fingers*

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AthenatheWitch In reply to HarlynStein [2015-08-17 06:24:35 +0000 UTC]

hehehe


and ikr <3 My favorite one is Blaye's X3

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HarlynStein In reply to AthenatheWitch [2015-08-17 06:25:47 +0000 UTC]

*ugly laugh* XD



I like them both tbh X3

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AthenatheWitch In reply to HarlynStein [2015-08-17 06:27:22 +0000 UTC]

lmfao XD


and hehehe "Whatcha thinkin'??"
"How much I hate you -_- " XD

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HarlynStein In reply to AthenatheWitch [2015-08-17 06:28:30 +0000 UTC]

Like, I would be doin the same thing though XD that's why I find that funny

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AthenatheWitch In reply to HarlynStein [2015-08-17 06:37:35 +0000 UTC]

mwahahha XD
How to be cruel to Jeff:USE THE FANGIRL VERSION TO PAIR HIM WITH SO HE HATES EVERYONE EVEN MORE THAN HE ALREADY DOES >

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HarlynStein In reply to AthenatheWitch [2015-08-17 06:45:52 +0000 UTC]

THAT IS PERFECT MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA ITS SO EVIL!!!!

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AthenatheWitch In reply to HarlynStein [2015-08-17 06:50:45 +0000 UTC]

JOIN THE JEFFXJEFF ARMY TODAY XD

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HarlynStein In reply to AthenatheWitch [2015-08-17 06:51:17 +0000 UTC]

I SHALL WHERE DO I SIGN UP FOR DIS!?!?!?!

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AthenatheWitch In reply to HarlynStein [2015-08-17 06:52:48 +0000 UTC]

UM...WE SHALL START A GROUP I GUESS?!?! XD

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HarlynStein In reply to AthenatheWitch [2015-08-17 06:56:26 +0000 UTC]

I GUESS SO THEN!!!!!! XD

((omg XD))

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