Kanohi43920 [2016-10-16 01:56:13 +0000 UTC]
I find it interesting that these chapters are centered around the conversations being had by those not on shift, rather than the actual events of the shifts. I mean, not that there should be much because of the fact that no one is making any moves this night evidently (or so you'd like us to think...), but I appreciate that we're not being forced to walk around and watch as nothing happens. I would be intrigued, though, to see what McKinley must have been thinking about during his shift.
Regardless, it was interesting seeing Rick and Aster so earnest with one another. The fact that they can share so much and understand that whatever is being said is not meant to personally harm the other person is pretty neat. I also find it hilarious that Rick, even in his narration and thoughts, still thinks with a Southern twang XD
This definitely served as a good tiding-over piece, but I think it also added some good perspectives to note for the future. For one, RickSash still has some prevalence in the real world, even if it was most vehemently expressed in the non-canon chapter that I didn't read all the way through. Secondly, we see that one of the upcoming fights on the island will be over leadership in the coming days, and that so far Sash, Rick, Citrus and McKinley are the contestants. I am thinking that their responses to whatever death comes next will play a large role in how they are viewed and their eventual influence, as noted by Aster.
There are a few others to be had, but since I had a long day and am a bit brain-dead, I'm too tired to list them. All in all, a good chapter to keep things going. Lots of dialogue, so I'm sure Kira's happy, haha.
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GabladeRunner In reply to Kanohi43920 [2016-10-18 02:05:39 +0000 UTC]
It was actually kind of a hard decision. It'd be great to just stick to Micky's POV, but it honestly has nothing to offer outside a waste of time. I'd like to keep each chapter with meaningful content towards the future of the story, or providing insight on the characters. Believe it or not, Micky's train of thought only strayed a little from his job. He has a personal connection to the last murder, so he doesn't want another, and he generally has a good work ethic. I mean, he's a HPA student, so he clearly had to work hard to get in.
Aster and Rick can get along fairly well just as their own characters. They're both fairly extroverted, though Rick is much more awkward, with strong connections to goals at hand and properly managing the group. I think I'll need some clarification down the road as to when and how they became so close in such a short period of time, especially when canonically Rick spent a lot of time with Sash in the beginning, but I wouldn't doubt the two would get along very well.
XD Of course! I had a deep thought about this a while ago thinking about how people think and how they act, and I think it would be really weird if people didn't think with the same voice they had. So, Southern Twang Rick exists in his mind as well.
Don't worry, the actual sexual actions are completely non-canon, as are really any intentions of romanticism as it stands. But, RickSash is just a fun ship of two guys who like order and keeping their friends alive at all costs~
Yep! The concern of leadership and holding strong will undoubtedly play a huge role in how the group will manage itself in light of all the despair. On top of it all, there's a lot of loud voices willing to take the role, but perhaps the personalities contrast too heavily to have just one leader in that scenario. But, hey, that's just food for thought.
Thanks once again for the comment. Hopefully we can see if your theory on Kira's reaction will be confirmed or denied soon enough
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