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Here is my Contest Entry for

This is kinda supposed to be based off of this:

From FotT prologue:
"Then suddenly she realised that the evil presence was still in the air. It seemed even stronger now. She felt a low growl rising in her throat. It was getting so powerful now it almost choked her.
Then there was a deafening roar that split through the air, making the ground tremble. This was definitely something big. Something very big. As she glanced up she realised that the sky was starting to turn black with dark, threatening clouds that didn't seem natural. Then over the cliff surrounding the forest a mist came, black as night, turning the ground behind it grey and colourless, devouring everything in it's path. There was only one thing it could be; a curse.
"Kal, run!"
Pushing her fear away, Kal glanced up to where Waka was on the tree branch, calling out a warning to her. As the curse engulfed the tree it was uprooted from the ground, and Waka was forced to teleport away in a cloud of sparks before he was thrown out.
Great. Convenient time for her collar to break. Now unable to copy the prophet's vanishing act, Kal glanced around, trying to find some means of escape. Her eyes came to rest on the entrance to Tsuta Ruins, which was wide open. Hoping that the curse wouldn't spread inside there, she unfolded her wings and sped towards the entrance."

I worked really hard on this and i hope you guys like it as much as i do!! XD

I'll probably regret it......but i guess I'll request my first critique.......................*hides in the emo corner*

Description
Here is my Contest Entry for

This is kinda supposed to be based off of this:

From FotT prologue:
"Then suddenly she realised that the evil presence was still in the air. It seemed even stronger now. She felt a low growl rising in her throat. It was getting so powerful now it almost choked her.
Then there was a deafening roar that split through the air, making the ground tremble. This was definitely something big. Something very big. As she glanced up she realised that the sky was starting to turn black with dark, threatening clouds that didn't seem natural. Then over the cliff surrounding the forest a mist came, black as night, turning the ground behind it grey and colourless, devouring everything in it's path. There was only one thing it could be; a curse.
"Kal, run!"
Pushing her fear away, Kal glanced up to where Waka was on the tree branch, calling out a warning to her. As the curse engulfed the tree it was uprooted from the ground, and Waka was forced to teleport away in a cloud of sparks before he was thrown out.
Great. Convenient time for her collar to break. Now unable to copy the prophet's vanishing act, Kal glanced around, trying to find some means of escape. Her eyes came to rest on the entrance to Tsuta Ruins, which was wide open. Hoping that the curse wouldn't spread inside there, she unfolded her wings and sped towards the entrance."

I worked really hard on this and i hope you guys like it as much as i do!! XD

I'll probably regret it......but i guess I'll request my first critique.......................*hides in the emo corner*