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Demachic — When I cannot sleep

Published: 2011-05-14 11:55:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 59081; Favourites: 3636; Downloads: 142
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Description Poem about not being able to sleep like you could when you were a kid. =]


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Lovli323 [2017-06-04 06:47:08 +0000 UTC]

My life.

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MangaxMango [2015-09-08 01:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Tomorrow is school. 20 minutes until my demise

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Reshiramu [2015-08-21 10:00:06 +0000 UTC]

was up until 11 today. I feel ya, man. Beautiful poem, too!

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Nightfurystars [2014-07-26 17:02:36 +0000 UTC]

Every day.I know how u feel, I always end up. Going to sleep and. 2:00 or 1:00!!!! 

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artanas42 [2013-12-26 05:31:10 +0000 UTC]

I feel ya, man. i'm right there with ya. well done.

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ilove-the-craft-team [2013-12-17 20:13:06 +0000 UTC]

love it!!

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Jolinnar [2013-06-17 19:31:20 +0000 UTC]

Love this ^.^

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brOKen-Mayhem17 [2013-06-10 00:51:57 +0000 UTC]

I know right!!! btw another job well done!!

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apatheticGoat [2013-03-04 08:17:42 +0000 UTC]

i just hope i can manage to be out by 5 0-0 then at lest i can get an hour of sleep

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stealthyninja21 [2012-11-22 06:47:13 +0000 UTC]

i can totally understand. ^_^

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Replica24 [2012-11-19 09:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Such a cute poem :3 *looks at clock* Hmm, what do you know, it's 3 AM where I am right now XD Random comment is random, but I couldn't help but laugh at the irony. And all of your work is amazing, so I wanted to leave another comment saying how amazing I think you and your work are! <3 You're so very talented :3

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ArdieMcFluff [2012-11-14 22:16:23 +0000 UTC]

Amazing how you can capture just exactly how I feel :3

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TheWolfsFriend [2012-11-02 22:49:07 +0000 UTC]

I can definitely relate here

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Fantasy-JG [2012-11-02 21:59:15 +0000 UTC]

I know the feeling! ^^

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TrollingGirl93 [2012-11-02 19:57:31 +0000 UTC]

Of all of your beautiful poems, this is my favourite one!
Because it fits my daily situation 100%!

God, i just want to go to bed and fall asleep OAO...

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leafclan99 [2012-09-25 20:42:46 +0000 UTC]

Why are you the one writing down my feelings? Oh, and stop spamming my favorite box!

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Demachic In reply to leafclan99 [2012-11-02 15:48:41 +0000 UTC]

hahaha, thanks ;D

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ModestoGomezJr [2012-09-25 04:28:50 +0000 UTC]

Your poems are very simple almost but very powerful and touching. Without using sophisticated words. Keep up the great work ! It is lovely !!

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Demachic In reply to ModestoGomezJr [2012-11-02 15:48:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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emyxpai [2012-09-11 07:12:39 +0000 UTC]

this is such a sweet poem!!

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Demachic In reply to emyxpai [2012-11-02 15:48:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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zakiaybee122 [2012-09-01 23:52:50 +0000 UTC]

that's how i am and i feel

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Demachic In reply to zakiaybee122 [2012-11-02 15:48:22 +0000 UTC]

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zakiaybee122 In reply to Demachic [2013-01-19 00:35:11 +0000 UTC]

no problemo

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indigo-san [2012-08-29 15:56:02 +0000 UTC]

lol you've just described my life.
great poem!

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Demachic In reply to indigo-san [2012-11-02 15:48:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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indigo-san In reply to Demachic [2012-11-03 23:08:10 +0000 UTC]

^^ You're welcome!

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llama2-YaY1 [2012-08-29 14:05:23 +0000 UTC]

So true

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Demachic In reply to llama2-YaY1 [2012-11-02 15:48:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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AnimePanda22 [2012-08-14 07:10:12 +0000 UTC]

That basically sums up my sleep life... yep. Nice poem! ^^

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Demachic In reply to AnimePanda22 [2012-11-02 15:48:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Dukesbox [2012-08-06 18:02:39 +0000 UTC]

nice1

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Demachic In reply to Dukesbox [2012-11-02 15:48:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Karen-chanOVERDRIVE [2012-08-06 05:13:24 +0000 UTC]

That's so cute!!

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Demachic In reply to Karen-chanOVERDRIVE [2012-11-02 15:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Jay-Kee [2012-07-18 18:56:24 +0000 UTC]

haha ya i can never get to sleep at the right times hah great poem!

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Demachic In reply to Jay-Kee [2012-11-02 15:48:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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SkylerJane [2012-07-10 02:26:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow I really like how you highlight specific words in your poems. Great job!

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Demachic In reply to SkylerJane [2012-07-10 02:29:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Pokeghost [2012-06-26 04:57:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it about 1 in the morning right now and, big surprise, I can't sleep.....at least I don't have to go anywhere tomorrow, but I really have to try and get more sleep on saturday nights. I fell asleep during church....I'm a terrible person....

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Madylyne [2012-06-19 23:12:36 +0000 UTC]

story of my life

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Demachic In reply to Madylyne [2012-11-02 15:47:59 +0000 UTC]

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Madylyne In reply to Demachic [2012-11-03 22:10:22 +0000 UTC]

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Hetalia-Bubble [2012-04-21 20:30:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm the exact same way!

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Demachic In reply to Hetalia-Bubble [2012-04-28 20:58:02 +0000 UTC]

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Hetalia-Bubble In reply to Demachic [2012-04-29 18:26:30 +0000 UTC]

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TisTeribbil [2012-03-28 19:02:57 +0000 UTC]

couldn't sleep at all last night, even though i was (am =n dead tired.

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Demachic In reply to TisTeribbil [2012-03-31 15:03:58 +0000 UTC]

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Wolf05 [2012-01-30 21:46:22 +0000 UTC]

What a lovely poem
I find it hard to get to sleep now too.I once stayed awake for 3 whole days before I could get to sleep.

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Demachic In reply to Wolf05 [2012-03-31 15:04:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh my!! O:

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