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Published: 2016-10-06 05:29:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 619; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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i.
shes a trick of the light; beams at me
aimlessly and tips back onto the carpet floor
the fibers scratch my knees as i hover 


ii.

we were drunk on the couch - pasta and pinot noir

i topple tipsy, on top of her

iii.

she crumples her napkins and i fold them neatly -

bitten fingernails catch in the seams of my heart

iv.

im a mess around her

flyaways and the buttons of my shirt are 

mismatched, like you and me

she laughs and smooths down all of my crinkles 

inside and out

v.

i asked her to put me back together 

while her ears were plugged with sleep

vi.

i trace the shape of the air with my palm

as she speeds down the four-oh-five

im still a little lost when i look at her

vii.

she takes what she can get in butterfly touches and

i skim my eyes over her in guilty fascination 

the skin of her stomach ridged with shimmering stripes

beckons to me and i bite my lip in frustration 

viii.

and i know im asking so much of her, that 

she can love me as hard as she can and it might still

not be enough;

ix.

so we try and try and try again;

x.

i still have a habit of falling for strangers and

she is well-known to me by now


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Comments: 12

angelserum [2017-07-01 11:08:26 +0000 UTC]

i really love this one so much

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vvlpes [2016-12-27 21:19:38 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I'm doing critiques for this year's Critmas and I've selected one of your pieces!


Oh my, I really like this one!
I'm guilty of imagining the lives of strangers, how complex and how deep they must be, and this reminds me of that feeling of trying to fit things to a person you've only glimpsed.
This seems to be more about someone who is known but remains a stranger at heart, or emotionally.

I'm not sure how well the lack of punctuation works in this, though. A few times, I found myself having to back-track because I read the lines wrong and was momentarily confused.
However, this could possibly be just me and my Grammar Nazi ways!

Again, a really beautiful poem that paints a love-story with unique imagery.

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affriolante [2016-11-17 02:23:23 +0000 UTC]

I love this. Yes.

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Ch-Ch-Cherry [2016-10-23 20:06:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god this is amazing~

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calliopen In reply to Ch-Ch-Cherry [2016-10-24 16:08:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you <3

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comatose-comet [2016-10-06 21:25:38 +0000 UTC]

jesus christ i adore this

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calliopen In reply to comatose-comet [2016-10-07 02:13:46 +0000 UTC]

oh gosh thank you

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L3Spark [2016-10-06 17:16:38 +0000 UTC]

This sooo beautiful

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calliopen In reply to L3Spark [2016-10-07 02:14:31 +0000 UTC]

<3

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pansydiv [2016-10-06 07:24:55 +0000 UTC]

YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES 
omg i'm sorry love

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calliopen In reply to pansydiv [2016-10-07 02:14:53 +0000 UTC]

thank u for ur advice darling i love u

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pansydiv In reply to calliopen [2016-10-09 05:50:45 +0000 UTC]

SAME 
*tuneless singing*i've loved you more than you'll ever know

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