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Published: 2011-06-01 11:32:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 2344; Favourites: 127; Downloads: 35
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A hopeless Piece. I'm still trying to get a handle on this whole comics thing and I need to find out exactly what my style is, as it stands I don't know. I got a "get it done on time and make it look hot" kinda attitude whenever my clients loom the deadline gillotine over my head. lol.But hey, practice makes perfect right?
Robin though in the foreground is Just too big, his face is too mature, he looks like a Grown ass man. the Batman I'm happy with. Except I don't know what's going on with the shoulder part of the cape, lol.
Let me know what you guys think. as always critiques welcome, especially in Works in progress cause a good advice at that early stage can intercept a potential bad habit or too.
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I think a large amount of why robin looks as old as he does is the jaw line, I'm not really sure, robins hand to me anyway looks a mite big, but I could be wrong about that.
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This is freaking intimidating... O_o I-I can't wrap my mind around the awesomeness that is this picture!
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I don't think I have the required vocabulary to expostulate on the awesomeness of this drawing. Simply great! Exquisite detail.... it's wow!
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HOLY CRAP. This is the best shading I've ever seen! The way your hatching changes direction to really flow around the shape of the object makes everything pop and gives it INCREDIBLE energy and movement.I'm faving this and saving it on my computer so I can study it!
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Wow ! really I think that you've had made a great job ^^. But I admit that the face of Robin look too much mature XD (but depend the way you whant to show him). But I love you'r art <3
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Very nice...
You might want to smooth out Robins face a little, to lose some of the dark lines that denote roughness/texture, as in what an older man might have.
As for that shoulder part of Batman's cape, it looks like you added more to the cape then necessary. Maybe if you expose more of his musculus deltoideus you'll gain a more dynamic effect with his shoulder.
Just a thought.
Great detail overall... I'm sure your client will be very pleased with the eventual outcome of this piece.
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Very nice work I think................................
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