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Minty- hallot asunder collab 2
Published: 2002-04-03 09:55:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 25877; Favourites: 507; Downloads: 2833
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hallot asunder collab #2I think this one turned out better..
hallot's poem is amazing as usual..
eh.. my drawing is alright.. still not worth the time I spent on it!! I did have a greenish and redish color to it like hallot did in his version of the pic but this one looked better without it..
AND HE WILL NOT SUBMIT HIS DAMN HIM!!
anyway, PLEASE COMMENT!! BOTH THE PIC AND THE POEM!!
here's the full poem:
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Like mint you burn my eyes
The scent of pleasure
Plain, but treasured
You are like a foreign object
a playful blade
The hardcore music
We all play...
Open lies but closed obsessions
truth makes all the people sad
taken from your honest hope
a playful mom a playful dad...
Like mint you make me Vomit
Premium malt beverage
Black pepper makes me dizzy
and promotes violance
induces rage
Open but closed doors
unique but closed minds
I am saddened, my you work
I am saddened for no reason.
Like mint you make soft voices
Voices in my head
make me do what needs be
make me right and wrong
depends on what you meant
but never lend a hand
open up the store of blackness
sell your soul to rock and roll
pay for your bannishment
pay, go to hell
Like mint you make me vomit...
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Comments: 235
you dont know how much i loved your poem. >w<
i love tha rt work too.
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the drawing is simply great, and the poem makes me think of duality quite well
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this is truly amazing
many many many of my regards
and much amazement on my behalf
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I totally love this! Both the picture and the poem. So much detail... Love it...
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I love what you've done with the texturing 
Looks very grungy
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ballpoint pen drawing scanned into photoshop...altered the color slightly and added brushes
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i like the border on this one.. 
do u have the brushes as well on ur gallery?
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um....wow.....if i had half your skillz, i would be alot better off....
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i love the textures in the picture, and the very busy feel... great job.
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I really love both the poem and the picture - they are both amazingly. Excellent work.
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Oh man... this is fucking amazing... The composition, the drawing, the poem, they're all fantastic.
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how the fuck u did this? its just totally awesome and outstanding...i loveeeeeeeeeeeee it!
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wow. both of you really compliment each other. together, your style is truly unique.
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Finally I get to speak to Asunder. I've only recently founfd this site........actually i only found it today. Ive been looking at Asunders work on DAprints. Asunder has to be my favourite artist on this site by far closely followed by Mythchan and Zzaga. If anyone who reads this has MSN feel free to chat to me because no one else is ever online.
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I love pictures with poems in them. This was one of the first pics I saw when I joined DA...which was not so long ago. This is the first chance I've really had to comment on some of the stuff I've wanted to. This is incredible asunder. The poem's amazing, the drawing's amazing....I love it...The semi-border of the film is awesome aswell - it's something different, and I think it works really well against the white background. I love the look of this picture. I don't know what it is about it, but it appeals to me in a big way. Very very nice asunder
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u are a god at drawing AND poetry :drools: damn.. in MAJOR awe here! im speechless.. *a good thing i promise* fucking shweet!
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I don't know what's bette the poem or the picture it's self, or could it just be that this picturs is just so good i can't think right.
REMEMBER...
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This is wonderful!!! And sure is going into my favorites!
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excellent poem, a thought and emotion you should never pass. greatly goes with the imagery.
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how come i didnt see this, stupid me! this is very beautiful, a great colab and superb outcome. i got to add this in my fave...damn excellent work and congratulations!
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wow.... definately plus favs
this is goin straigt on my desktop
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grungy yet delicate. and the words! this is outstanding! +favs
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I love art that is all scratchy and isnt afraid of being messy as part of the design..This is loverly chaotic and just a delight to behold
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You two did a magnificant job on a very
painful piece...The inner struggle we
all face wieghing cost and consequince...
How it all gets rolled into 1 very ugly
ball till it seems ya ain't spose to do shit
any more...
I can relate...I am a product of my choices
as we all are or will be...
Excellent Work..
RaVen
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...holy shit.
That's all I have to say.
Well, also: your line work is astounding. ::cries::
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I know what I see is a real piece of art, but, I couldn't like it? I wonder why...
I feel this is great, but, I... well, I...
I don't know, is it a little messy?
Nevermind... Nevermore... Neverwinter... Neverever
Great after all...
>
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Shit dude this is amazing, i love this, deffinate fav!!!
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what can i say when it's all been said ? just another ...
ok i'll just say it; it's freakin amazing k ??!!
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awesome job the poem is great too, this picture really brings it out ...keep up the great work +favs
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i really like the other one to be on my page cuz it's so wonderful... but i have to do it... this rocks sooooooo hard it's undefinable and i can't even find words to express myself... i am lost in the beauty presented here + fav
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'like mint you make me vomit'
this is soooo F***ing cool. wicked poem. i love your drawing.
jumbled, chaotic, love the figures. are there just two, or more i'm missing??
you knew it was going to be a favourite.
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