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ArtyLubear — The Spirit of the Leaves

Published: 2009-11-02 23:06:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 906; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 28
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Edit:His arm looks really awkward..

GAHHH

i finally finished this. I was practicing backgrounds and shading. I used many references for the style. Krushz pose is crappy D: I didn't actually think this would turn into a complete picture though..

I used *Kaylink 's tutorial for coloring/shading, and i referenced *AlectorFencer 's style of backgrounds for the background. I'm pretty satisfied... kinda. XD

I'd probably add more but my shoulder is acting up again and i don't want to provoke it and make it kill me..

It's said that Krushz guards the forest from all who do not hold a pure heart.

Krushz/art ©
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Comments: 87

Holarctic [2009-11-03 22:06:50 +0000 UTC]

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First of all, I want to compliment you with this picture. It is without a doubt the pretties you've made so far! Congratulations!

But this wouldn't be a critique if I would only say good things. The position of the front leg is indeed a bit odd. The paw pads look very good though the leg itself looks like it's twisted in a very strange way. The line of the shoulder should be drawn more to the left in stead of to the right. This way you'll get the impression that the leg is indeed pulled up behind the shoulder in stead of next to it.

I've made some guidelines to show you what I mean: [link]

You can also see in my guidelines that I've changed the direction of the fur a little bit. If it rains, the fur lays much flatter than usual. The bottom of the fur can be as scruffy as you like trough the top shouldn't be.

Speaking of rain... Rain never falls straight down. You did a very nice job on drawing the rain though it would look even more realistic if it was just slightly turned to one side.

You did a great job on the background and it gives a lot of depth to the picture. The different colors that you've used in the grass really gives it a very natural look.

Great job and I hope to see more of your artwork soon!

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ArtyLubear In reply to Holarctic [2009-11-03 22:09:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Max! I know that leg is bothering the crap out of me! I didn't noticed how messed up it really was until i uploaded it and i was like, Damn!
As for the rain i should have made some go crooked and some straight,

but thanks so much!

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Holarctic In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 22:10:51 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome. I hope my critique helped you a little. ^_^

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ArtyLubear In reply to Holarctic [2009-11-03 22:12:57 +0000 UTC]

It did a lot actually !

I'm drawing a rabbit now!

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Holarctic In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 22:13:14 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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ArtyLubear In reply to Holarctic [2009-11-03 22:14:57 +0000 UTC]

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purplegoosey [2009-11-04 02:26:52 +0000 UTC]

I love this piece of art, you are improving so much! The background is amazing, it works really well with the character.

My little critique is to have some streams of water rolling off his body, just to make the character look like he really fits into the scene. And maybe you could add a little more rain in the background? Other than that, I see no problems

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ArtyLubear In reply to purplegoosey [2009-11-04 12:00:43 +0000 UTC]

oh that's actually a good idea! Thanks <3

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purplegoosey In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-04 21:51:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Nikauri-Susi [2009-11-03 16:49:51 +0000 UTC]

I like the super-attentive pose; it looks like he's really doing his job. Plus, the background is pretty detailed; the tree branches and bark look kinda realistic.

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ArtyLubear In reply to Nikauri-Susi [2009-11-03 16:54:32 +0000 UTC]

I'm trying to improve my trees, they are so difficult sometimes!!

Thanks a lot

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Nikauri-Susi In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 17:07:04 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, I know, right? And you're welcome!

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ArtyLubear In reply to Nikauri-Susi [2009-11-03 17:07:43 +0000 UTC]

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Chyriel [2009-11-03 11:41:06 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is really beautiful! You are improving like WOAW x) Great work"!

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ArtyLubear In reply to Chyriel [2009-11-03 13:58:21 +0000 UTC]

bahh i'm glad to hear that cause i hate my old backgrounds

Thanks so much!

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Chyriel In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 17:13:47 +0000 UTC]

xD

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Amirun [2009-11-03 05:10:36 +0000 UTC]

This is really great, the style of coloring fits your style

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ArtyLubear In reply to Amirun [2009-11-03 13:57:55 +0000 UTC]

Does it really?
fff thanks lauren!

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Bianka111 [2009-11-03 05:02:04 +0000 UTC]

The background is wonderful !
And this character looks like very cool 8D Nice coloring and shading too

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ArtyLubear In reply to Bianka111 [2009-11-03 13:57:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! Took awhile lol

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Bianka111 In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 14:01:04 +0000 UTC]

No problem ^^

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SongOfTheLoneWolf [2009-11-03 02:57:20 +0000 UTC]

Say WHOOT!!!

This is great Cap!!

I love his face, and his tail and his paw and-and the background...and the little raindrops bouncing offa him

I don't think this is crappy at all :/

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ArtyLubear In reply to SongOfTheLoneWolf [2009-11-03 13:57:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot Aurem! I'm glad you don't think it's crappy haha

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SongOfTheLoneWolf In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 18:23:50 +0000 UTC]



This looks very proffessional, why would I think it's crappy?

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ArtyLubear In reply to SongOfTheLoneWolf [2009-11-03 18:26:50 +0000 UTC]

it does? !

I wouldn't think it does, i dunno it feels kind of... mefdjfkasd...

XD

But thank you <3

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SongOfTheLoneWolf In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 18:33:22 +0000 UTC]

XD Don't artists always say that about their art?

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ArtyLubear In reply to SongOfTheLoneWolf [2009-11-03 18:36:42 +0000 UTC]

i think so haha, cause you can never be satisfied.

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SongOfTheLoneWolf In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 18:43:03 +0000 UTC]

^__^

I heard DeGas kept coming to his friend's house after he gave a portrait to him to work on it, lol

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ArtyLubear In reply to SongOfTheLoneWolf [2009-11-03 18:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Lol whaaa?

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SongOfTheLoneWolf In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 18:55:09 +0000 UTC]

I dunno anymore, lol

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ArtyLubear In reply to SongOfTheLoneWolf [2009-11-03 18:59:24 +0000 UTC]

XD

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SongOfTheLoneWolf In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 19:03:47 +0000 UTC]

Lol

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SpiffyDisco [2009-11-03 02:07:43 +0000 UTC]

FFF what texture do you use for the fur? O:
and lol

fanart



PLAINNN.

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ArtyLubear In reply to SpiffyDisco [2009-11-03 13:56:57 +0000 UTC]

oh i used the burn tool and set it to the maple leaf brush and just went over it

HAHAHA FANART

I'll make something for plain

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SpiffyDisco In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 23:15:06 +0000 UTC]

fanart

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ArtyLubear In reply to SpiffyDisco [2009-11-03 23:47:31 +0000 UTC]

fanart

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Wonderpup6 [2009-11-03 01:08:13 +0000 UTC]

aww i love the pink paw

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ArtyLubear In reply to Wonderpup6 [2009-11-03 01:10:57 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks

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Wonderpup6 In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 04:27:46 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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dragonsnouts [2009-11-03 00:08:45 +0000 UTC]

KRUSHZ!
CELL SHADING!
UBER BACKGROUND STYLE ADAPTATION!
O MAAAAIIIISSSSSS.

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ArtyLubear In reply to dragonsnouts [2009-11-03 00:09:27 +0000 UTC]

FWAHH YOU"RE SO INTENSE SHARSHAR <3

THANK YOUUUUUUU

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dragonsnouts In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 00:11:00 +0000 UTC]

YES I AM.

NO PROOOOOBBBBB <3

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ArtyLubear In reply to dragonsnouts [2009-11-03 00:14:19 +0000 UTC]

fanart

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dragonsnouts In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 00:58:35 +0000 UTC]

XDDDDD YOU MANIPULATIVE GIRL.

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ArtyLubear In reply to dragonsnouts [2009-11-03 01:00:06 +0000 UTC]

YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO

fanart

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dragonsnouts In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 01:04:04 +0000 UTC]

DO I NOW?!??!1/?!?/1/1//1?!/?!??!?!

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ArtyLubear In reply to dragonsnouts [2009-11-03 01:04:45 +0000 UTC]

YEAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I"LL KEEP SAYING IT >D

fanart

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dragonsnouts In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 01:05:11 +0000 UTC]

OH NOES THE MANIPULATIVE POWERRRRRR.

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ArtyLubear In reply to dragonsnouts [2009-11-03 01:07:18 +0000 UTC]

HEHEHEH I WIN >D hahahah

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dragonsnouts In reply to ArtyLubear [2009-11-03 01:08:35 +0000 UTC]

...No you didn't. OwO

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