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Published: 2012-05-29 19:23:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 1630; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Miztli with his traditional martial costume.
He is the stronger fighter of the temple, Golden Lion, he doesn't know the mercy.
He is a very aggressive person, he says many vulgarities. There are 3 things that he loves: music, videogames and girls. He tries to get the oportunity to sleep with the girls he likes (he is good in sex). But also he is a good person that he cares about the people close to him.
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Comments: 9
Hello,
I'm with MA_I and I'll be critiquing your work, alright?
Most the the anatomy looks pretty good from what I see... until you get to the forearm. His forearm is... alright, I just wish it has more meat on the top... more muscle everywhere equal more muscle there. Just add a little extra curve up against the bicep, okay?
The hand is overall in good condition, but you have some problems with it. In that pose, the thumb doesn't look like that. The picture makes it look like he has his thumb stretched over the bottom half of his index finger... which is not only uncomfortable, but would harm your thumb if you tried to punch someone like that. His thumb is also way too long, since I am doing the pose (according to what it looks like to me) right now and can't even touch my thumb to my middle finger. Please use reference on your hand. Even balling up your right hand (or left) into a fist and turning it a bit is better than nothing... in fact... that would work very well. [link] Here's a good model for the fist.
The glove idea is a cool idea, but it only highlights the flaws in your hand when it's skin-tight like that. Here's a good glove. [link] Notice how the the glove doesn't hug the fingers?
Other than that, I really like it! Her hair design is pretty cool and his coloring is done well. You just have some problems with your hand. Don't worry, I'm not really good at hands either: I just reference the piss out of everything.
I hope this helps!
~TLA
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Thanks, your right, sometimes i've got troubles with hands.
Thanks for the review.
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^___^ not a problem! If you need any help, please let me know.
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Thanks, sweetheart, he is my favorite character from my mangas.
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awwww ur welcome lov hes pretty cool
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