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Broskitus [2011-10-20 07:01:06 +0000 UTC]
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Hello~ I'm sorry if you don't know me and stuff, but I'm speaking on the behalf of your followers, friends and watchers. I think this picture looks absolutley fantastic!
I'd just like to say that the peice of paper is perfetly in the middle of the snap shot, which is a good key point in order to make it stand out! Alot of photos are casted in this point, great photographers (such as yourself) take great shots like this one when the object is in the centre or if taking a landscape picture somewhere in the scenery.
The grammar is good, there are no spelling mistakes but the punctuation needs a bit of tinkering with. Like instead of a fullstop after work, it'd be better off as a commer. Apart from that little tiny thing, the message sends a nice, clean and clear message to the viewers to not give up after attemping something once.
I really love you're work, the backround is fuzzy and colours blend places, leaving the hand, which is pretty much all shadow but light enough to recognise it as a hand. Then the message sits comfortably and tilted to a side to give it some real touch to it. It's clear and the writing is very neat and clear.
You've done an extremley good job on this! I wish you luck on more of your photos! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
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