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Alephunky ā€” ...In my veins

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Description You are not a colorful teletubbie, right? So... kids, don't try this at home.
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weoosh [2010-11-03 21:38:59 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


First off, let me say this photo pops out to me. I was surfing through images to critique and this one grabbed my attention. It's loud, pretty, and even the title makes me curious.

I think this piece has an interesting feel to it. The idea of rainbow veins is thought-provoking and unique. However, it's not so original and crazy that I'll be thinking about it for a while afterwards. At the moment it makes me smile, but it isn't the most memorable photo. On the upside, though, you have fantastic technique! I think the use of paint instead of lets say, markers, is a great choice because it gives the photo more texture and vivid colors. The image itself is pretty clear as well. You did a great job with the idea of contrasting the background with the subject itself. It gives it that nice pop!

Overall, this photo is quirky and nicely executed but could be a bit more interesting if you added in more factors. Perhaps instead of just using an arm, maybe a different body part.

Good job! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>

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SoulDuals In reply to weoosh [2012-02-13 23:33:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm going to mark this critique as fair, but I don't fully agree. I think the arm was a perfect choice, considering people don't usually slit their calves

I will add that I think the image would have been more impactful if the wrist looked a bit more "slit". Of course i"m not saying to slit your wrist! Haha! Just with makeup or something, give the wrist the effect of being "slit".

All and all I enjoy this photo. Though, it doesn't say anything on the topic, it's a fantastic representation of gay pride if one ever schose to use it in that form.

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Alephunky In reply to weoosh [2010-11-04 16:50:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for your words and suggestions

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weoosh In reply to Alephunky [2010-11-04 19:05:36 +0000 UTC]

no problem! i love your work! (:

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beccalendsahand [2012-08-02 06:19:11 +0000 UTC]

Thats pretty awesome

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FntsmZ [2012-07-09 04:02:49 +0000 UTC]

que idea tan genial!!!!

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trixelina [2012-04-23 02:07:39 +0000 UTC]

interesting.

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Phin-dicated [2012-04-02 07:20:05 +0000 UTC]

All artists feel like we bleed paint. Or rainbows. Or both. Love the idea!

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alterna7ivo47 [2012-02-28 13:14:25 +0000 UTC]

lov it

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ShugarFairyPrincesh [2012-02-17 17:32:23 +0000 UTC]

*reads desc*

This means that YOU are a colorful teletubbie...

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ZyanFields [2012-02-11 01:58:55 +0000 UTC]

Art is that one that you feel it in your veins.

I know this will look as another "Good!" comment, but beleaive me it touch something. Also it seems very entreteining, and happy

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pedroography [2012-01-19 11:08:39 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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Cherry-girl77 [2012-01-12 14:09:06 +0000 UTC]

I love this
Do you mind if I paint it for a school project?

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katt315 [2012-01-08 13:55:43 +0000 UTC]

Haha xD Awesome!!

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bubblepearls [2011-12-29 08:31:25 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THOSE COLOURS!~

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jules-makk [2011-11-28 01:39:53 +0000 UTC]

simple bold design,,!

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Righteous-Scalliwag [2011-10-22 18:35:56 +0000 UTC]

The lighting is impressive, and the contrasting colors are eyecatching.

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adamismylove [2011-10-17 21:51:16 +0000 UTC]

[link] ;D

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kwikdraw [2011-10-07 07:45:29 +0000 UTC]

I want to see who did this to you...

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Chibi-mimi-tan [2011-10-02 17:51:59 +0000 UTC]

so funny

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existstrategy [2011-10-02 02:57:54 +0000 UTC]

how vibrant! i love the choice of colors you used!

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adamterrelonge [2011-09-25 13:02:03 +0000 UTC]

Very lovely and colourful

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Happytown124 [2011-09-12 17:49:41 +0000 UTC]

A friend of mine had done similar,only she had "cut" her veins a had written in her palm "why?"

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TeamPeetaForeva In reply to Happytown124 [2011-10-02 00:11:35 +0000 UTC]

Whats that deviation called?

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Happytown124 In reply to TeamPeetaForeva [2011-10-04 18:24:08 +0000 UTC]

It's not actually a deviation,it is just a picture of her.She likes to do such things and she is also drawing great anime!(instead of me,because i can only draw abstract)

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DeviantDuckie [2011-08-16 00:02:27 +0000 UTC]

I truly enjoyed this, thank you for sharing.

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kum-ja [2011-08-01 16:49:44 +0000 UTC]

wow i luv ur art!!!

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iwuvgarfield [2011-07-23 04:00:18 +0000 UTC]

NO!i am a colorful teletubbie,damn it! you can't stop me from showing it *bites my own wrist and rainbow blood comes out* SEE?...pretty colors...except pink...i hate pink....

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Ekozette [2011-07-07 00:39:49 +0000 UTC]

you've been featured![link]

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loyaltothenight [2011-06-30 15:53:28 +0000 UTC]

RAINBOW VEINS!!!!!!
i love that song...

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fallengc [2011-06-07 22:07:54 +0000 UTC]

hahahahaha. -cuts self- poo!

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NeoNBlacKHearTAttacK [2011-06-06 12:32:28 +0000 UTC]

i made a simmilar painting a few months ago :3

bad ass pic btw *.*

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arrowzee [2011-06-04 22:51:50 +0000 UTC]

Cheer up and dry your damp eyes, and tell me when it rains
Then blend up that rainbow above you, and shoot it through your veins.
-Rainbow Veins by Owl City
Love that song. First thing I thought of when I saw this picture.

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Very-WAtSC [2011-06-04 17:04:53 +0000 UTC]

WOO what fuck great paint )))

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Sappire123456 [2011-05-07 23:41:22 +0000 UTC]

rAINBOWISH NOCE PLUS GREAT JOB

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mizhelrawr [2011-05-07 07:05:02 +0000 UTC]

oooh! que ermosa pik

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booklover33 [2011-04-24 15:58:53 +0000 UTC]

high rise veins of the avenues bright eyes and subtle variations of blue every where its balanced there like a rainbow above you
Rainbow veins owl city

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Seeing-inTechnicolor [2011-04-10 02:06:21 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of the song Rainbow Veins by Owl City(:
Very creative, and the colors work so well together

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ArtisticTwins [2011-04-08 23:58:10 +0000 UTC]

AHahah awesome!

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pastelblu [2011-04-08 02:28:14 +0000 UTC]

That looks really cool
is that your hand??

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KupoSenpai [2011-04-08 01:00:44 +0000 UTC]

I think the image is strong, BUT i think all the negative space in upper right could be used more, like maybe a streak of the blood or a splattered indication of the 'instrument' used.

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LeChaoss [2011-04-02 16:32:18 +0000 UTC]

~whaaaa i did a photo like this but it was just bad love the lighting& the colours ;D

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MeMaxie [2011-03-17 12:56:23 +0000 UTC]

lol Love it.

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xtechnicolor-skyline [2011-03-12 20:09:33 +0000 UTC]

ah! I tried to do this exact thing a few years ago, but failed quite miserably. Good job! =]

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lynxrush [2011-03-07 02:51:51 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of Rainbow Veins by Owl City.

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kitten-katie [2011-03-05 18:56:43 +0000 UTC]

what kind of camera do you use?

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VariaZim [2011-03-05 14:14:16 +0000 UTC]

periods must be a mindfuck :/

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TheNESLink [2011-03-05 06:54:09 +0000 UTC]

Heh, "Rainbow Veins" by Owl City.

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Nanakonomidori [2011-02-20 20:20:41 +0000 UTC]

Nice
i don't exactly like how the paint looks all fluorecent
but it's still a great concept

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toxickat13 [2011-02-20 00:36:46 +0000 UTC]

ew even your insides are bright law

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