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321Technonote123 — Caucasian Mountain Dog by-nc-nd

Published: 2016-10-02 06:46:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 303; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description Constructive Criticism welcomed.

Hey guys!~

WHOA, WHAT IS THIS? TWO pieces submitted in ONE day? WHOAAAAA! XD
I've calmed down a bit now XD Then again, it is later. I was a bit hyper earlier. ;w;'

Anyhow, this was a bit of practice on...anatomy, you could say? I also was trying to practice realism too.
I didn't exactly trace the picture (look below). I looked at the pic on my school computer, actually XD Then, I copied it. Please don't tell me I stole this, since I really am not claiming the pic. (I doubt I'd be assumed of such anyways, honestly o3o)

Ahem. Anyhow, I think I actually did pretty good. Except for the back legs. asdfghjkl I had issues on them. Otherwise, I think it looks alright.

Anyhow, hope you guys liked it!~ If you did, please favorite this. I appreciate the support. <3
I love you guys!~ Hope you have a nice day/night!~ <3

Reference: s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/2… ;
Artwork (c) Me

~Smile. Paradise will come to you soon.~
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Comments: 20

DrLimeade [2016-10-02 06:57:10 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


As pencil drawings go, this is pretty damn sweet. The texture of the fur is extremely well done, and the line work in general is great, and the anatomy is spot on. However, if I had to make some criticism, by main one would be I would like to see some shading. I also wished this wasn't drawn on line paper, since it kinda takes me out of the piece slightly. Some more nitpicky things would be patch of fir on the dogs chest, which looks a little strange to me, and the shading you did on the nose, which looks kinda inconsistent. Overall, very good, but could use some work in some small specific areas.

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321Technonote123 In reply to DrLimeade [2016-10-03 00:49:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your critique <3

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SnowedCoffee [2016-10-02 17:00:25 +0000 UTC]

anatomy skills are over the roof rn



seriously tho this is such a accurate dog right there

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321Technonote123 In reply to SnowedCoffee [2016-10-02 17:17:09 +0000 UTC]

XD I used a reference

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SnowedCoffee In reply to 321Technonote123 [2016-10-02 18:56:43 +0000 UTC]

oH

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321Technonote123 In reply to SnowedCoffee [2016-10-02 18:57:40 +0000 UTC]

Yee. It's in the description XD

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Taberpa [2016-10-02 06:53:58 +0000 UTC]

That certainly is a dog 

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321Technonote123 In reply to Taberpa [2016-10-02 06:54:27 +0000 UTC]

Yes it is

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Taberpa In reply to 321Technonote123 [2016-10-02 06:55:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure how to Critique past the fact that it's a dog and looks like a dog 

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321Technonote123 In reply to Taberpa [2016-10-02 06:56:23 +0000 UTC]

ROFL It's okay

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Taberpa In reply to 321Technonote123 [2016-10-02 06:57:34 +0000 UTC]

On a scale from Dog-not a dog I'd give it a Dog out of Dog 

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321Technonote123 In reply to Taberpa [2016-10-02 07:00:10 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... Very accurate... It does seem doglike, doesn't it?

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Taberpa In reply to 321Technonote123 [2016-10-02 07:00:59 +0000 UTC]

Quite 5 Dogs 

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321Technonote123 In reply to Taberpa [2016-10-02 07:02:21 +0000 UTC]

I should start a bidding. Dogs for a dog. Hmm.. yes.

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Taberpa In reply to 321Technonote123 [2016-10-02 07:03:35 +0000 UTC]

I'd give a 40x30 pixel dog for that dog

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321Technonote123 In reply to Taberpa [2016-10-02 07:05:56 +0000 UTC]

That would be a dog deal

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Taberpa In reply to 321Technonote123 [2016-10-02 07:06:48 +0000 UTC]

My dog that pun wasn't even a pun like by definition 

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321Technonote123 In reply to Taberpa [2016-10-02 16:00:42 +0000 UTC]

You don't know what you're dogging about

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Taberpa In reply to 321Technonote123 [2016-10-02 22:51:22 +0000 UTC]

You've Doggone to far 

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321Technonote123 In reply to Taberpa [2016-10-02 23:00:18 +0000 UTC]

Dog cannot save you now from the puns.

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