Roken-Zelza In reply to glennj26 [2014-08-18 23:49:33 +0000 UTC]

I will be contuniing to a third chapter soon, I have had to take time off due to Military service and now starting college classes. I shall be putting chapter 3 up in a few days perhaps a week! Sorry for the long wait.

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Roken-Zelza In reply to Iron-Stride-EX [2013-10-12 02:32:48 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you. My old account had little to nothing on it anyway

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Iron-Stride-EX In reply to Roken-Zelza [2013-10-12 05:52:39 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. Hehe, not much of a loss then.

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Roken-Zelza In reply to Iron-Stride-EX [2013-10-12 06:22:27 +0000 UTC]

Ya, lol. All I do on this one is make cards and write a sub-par story tho XD not sure this one is much of a gain. lol

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Iron-Stride-EX In reply to Roken-Zelza [2013-10-12 06:57:57 +0000 UTC]

Pfft...it's something. XD

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Roken-Zelza In reply to Iron-Stride-EX [2013-10-12 07:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Lol true I guess. tho Yu-Gi-Oh! cards and Erotic novels dont really seem to go together lol!

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Iron-Stride-EX In reply to Roken-Zelza [2013-10-12 07:22:04 +0000 UTC]

Nah, it is perfection...

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Roken-Zelza In reply to Iron-Stride-EX [2013-10-12 07:58:32 +0000 UTC]

Haha I'll take that as a complement. If you're interested in reading the erotic novel the first chapter is posted and the 2nd one (the one that starts mature content) will be up in a day or so. I've been lazy with writing it. Lol 

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Iron-Stride-EX In reply to Roken-Zelza [2013-10-12 08:13:12 +0000 UTC]

Sure, just being silly though. XD

I'll take a look at it, though "erotic" is not my thing. And I'm lazy too...I started writing a story like three years ago, and only two chapters are completed. XD

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Roken-Zelza In reply to Iron-Stride-EX [2013-10-12 16:51:00 +0000 UTC]

Lol, Im sure any of your half finished stories are better than my completed ones XD 

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Iron-Stride-EX In reply to Roken-Zelza [2013-10-12 21:23:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, right.

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Roken-Zelza In reply to Iron-Stride-EX [2013-10-12 21:29:05 +0000 UTC]

Trust me, all my stories are boring and lack luster I'm sure yours are awesome.

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Iron-Stride-EX In reply to Roken-Zelza [2013-10-12 21:46:39 +0000 UTC]

I read the first part of your story, it seems to be written well. And I won't accept this modesty! >8U

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Roken-Zelza In reply to Iron-Stride-EX [2013-10-12 22:17:14 +0000 UTC]

Lol its hashed together and has more errors than I care to fix XD Surely after only the first page you can see the mistakes, over used words and errors. :3

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Iron-Stride-EX In reply to Roken-Zelza [2013-10-12 22:38:33 +0000 UTC]

I see much worse mistakes all the time though.

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Roken-Zelza In reply to Iron-Stride-EX [2013-10-12 23:58:18 +0000 UTC]

While I thank you for your kindness I do fear my writing is still only mediocre at best

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Iron-Stride-EX In reply to Roken-Zelza [2013-10-13 00:06:36 +0000 UTC]

Everyone was first a beginner.

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